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Cinquain
1943
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1943
She grins:
"They say that when
you've nothing to live for,
you do not live; and, yet, I'm still
alive"...
Written by
takis1917
Published
13th May 2018
| Edited
1st Apr 2020
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buddhakitty
13th May 2018 4:10pm
Good one.
buddhakitty.
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takis1917
13th May 2018 8:42pm
thank you, Budd!
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smackdownraven
13th May 2018 7:06pm
dearest Takis
I don't come across many
that I feel can honestly understand what I feel..
you dear poet expressed here deeply
a true understanding..
I felt this one to my core..
love Raven
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takis1917
13th May 2018 8:47pm
Dear Raven, I have long stopped searching for answers; I still have some questions, though, and if any of them touch you, it must mean that they make some sense...
Thank you!
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smackdownraven
13th May 2018 8:55pm
we are of like minds dearest Takis
I have many questions too..
yes you reached right into me with this write..
I no longer felt alone if that makes sense
in the place I call limbo where one lingers..
love to you dear poet..
Raven
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crimsin
(Unveiling)
13th May 2018 8:44pm
dearest Takis
so vast is your ocean
my heart feels the weight of this one..
love Crim
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summultima
(uma)
- Edited 15th May 2018 7:48am
15th May 2018 7:38am
there's this 'point' , perhaps so many points ..in make of this 'nothing' ..
a deep soul bears & knows it all..
a read that weighs heavy enough so long to feel flutters of lightness..
i like the way you weave the time & feel &..
loving adoring ur words dear poet
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Anonymous
16th May 2018 6:24pm
I simple enjoyed reading this piece
automatically put a smile in my face
thank you for sharing
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