Haiku I (visual poetry)

I'm on the side of the moon.  Fine work Jade!

Oh Thomas that was so fast!  Did you catch the image of the poem and the photo I just added?  I thank you so much for the comment, I just hope you saw it.

The moon is awesome. ;)

Nice poem, Jade!

Thank you so much, dear moon’s light!

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Ahh...the sun and moon. The two lovers of the sky. Wonderful work. Looking forward to more from you.

buddhakitty.

Thank you, I very much appreciate your thoughts & enjoyment of my little ‘ku, dear Buddha kitty.🙏

They have no right to claim anything...
Prove it first

Hi dizzz, and thanks for coming over with your thoughts.  As for proof, there it is (in a photo taken from off of Baha’s coast), proof evident of the gold everyday on the horizon as the sun leaves, seeking, just as the moon begins her nightly reign.  
   
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Thank you, dear harleea, for your thoughtful words.  I’m sure you’ve got the right idea when it comes to the dynamics of solar & lunar.

I absolutely love Haiku and other forms of Japanese poetry as well.
Great job!!

Why thank you, Ken, I’ve written Japanese short form poetry for many years...

my all-time favorite poetic mode of expression.

~Jadey✍️

King Sun needs his gold
Moon shows night her silver faces
Sky reflects love's light


Really loved the visual...and the haiku...


thomas

Thank you, dear Thomcat, for always being open to what I do when I compose in short free verse, particularly Eastern/ Japanese.  And of course, those that we have written, bouncing off one another.

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