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"Beyond"
Description left In disbelief
parables, not from scribes
Not from a multi-sided die
The two Obols will not warrant
Ferry across water
Charon will not become your guide
Obtuse look at the other side
May have left shivering
Continue, dumbfounded aside
An awkward view
Few that can
Will continue.
parables, not from scribes
Not from a multi-sided die
The two Obols will not warrant
Ferry across water
Charon will not become your guide
Obtuse look at the other side
May have left shivering
Continue, dumbfounded aside
An awkward view
Few that can
Will continue.
Published 10th May 2018
Author's Note
A note:
If you don't know about meter, check it out.
I am not at all traditional, but it is there as a layer to this one.
(And others of mine)
Also,
The sideways 8.
If you don't know about meter, check it out.
I am not at all traditional, but it is there as a layer to this one.
(And others of mine)
Also,
The sideways 8.
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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Anonymous
- Edited 27th Dec 2019 12:45pm
10th May 2018 2:06pm
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10th May 2018 2:11pm
Thank you for the interest and even more so for the constructive criticism (great).
Though, 'Become,' and 'continue' are very important.
Read the last bit of my 'Authors notes.'
Thanks again,
Me (The Only)
Though, 'Become,' and 'continue' are very important.
Read the last bit of my 'Authors notes.'
Thanks again,
Me (The Only)
10th May 2018 2:13pm
