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Too little... (a haiku)

Written by
Rachelleundrgrd
Published 10th May 2018
Author's Note
Written for the visual haiku competition.
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Re. Too little... (a haiku)
10th May 2018 12:39pm
Re: Re. Too little... (a haiku)
10th May 2018 1:47pm
Re. Too little... (a haiku)
10th May 2018 1:34pm
Lol, Men, too late knocking, conjures up all sorts of imagery ...well 3 at least in my case. Nice haiku, Rachelle.
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Re: Re. Too little... (a haiku)
10th May 2018 1:51pm
One of my favorite parts about short writes. Thanks for making me smile and imagine at least four of your three....:)
Re. Too little... (a haiku)
10th May 2018 11:59pm
Excellent, Rachelle!
I would eschew the end-stop next time. It's not consistent and sticks out somewhat. However, doesn't deter from the beauty of it.
I would eschew the end-stop next time. It's not consistent and sticks out somewhat. However, doesn't deter from the beauty of it.
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Re. Too little... (a haiku)
11th May 2018 4:56am
i think you are right-especially with how the font was fading out nicely at the end into the image... next time.
Thank you for the feedback and the kind words! Appreciate them both greatly!
Thank you for the feedback and the kind words! Appreciate them both greatly!
Re. Too little... (a haiku)
27th Jul 2018 7:11am
Brava Rachelle! The sight of noble polar bears reduced to skin and bone is heartbreaking and an undeniable wake up call.
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