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Too little... (a haiku)
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Too little... (a haiku)
Written by
Rachelleundrgrd
Published
10th May 2018
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Visual Poetry #haiku
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Written for the visual haiku competition.
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#animals
#environment
#haiku
#nature
#pollution
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Re. Too little... (a haiku)
buddhakitty
10th May 2018 12:39pm
Well said. Good one.
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Rachelleundrgrd
10th May 2018 1:47pm
Thanks much!
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Re. Too little... (a haiku)
Billy_Snagg
(Rist Jizzmann)
10th May 2018 1:34pm
Lol, Men, too late knocking, conjures up all sorts of imagery ...well 3 at least in my case. Nice haiku, Rachelle.
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Rachelleundrgrd
10th May 2018 1:51pm
One of my favorite parts about short writes. Thanks for making me smile and imagine at least four of your three....:)
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Re. Too little... (a haiku)
Ahavati
(Tams)
10th May 2018 11:59pm
Excellent, Rachelle!
I would eschew the end-stop next time. It's not consistent and sticks out somewhat. However, doesn't deter from the beauty of it.
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Re. Too little... (a haiku)
Rachelleundrgrd
11th May 2018 4:56am
i think you are right-especially with how the font was fading out nicely at the end into the image... next time.
Thank you for the feedback and the kind words! Appreciate them both greatly!
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Re. Too little... (a haiku)
Gahddess_Worship
(Osomajestuoso)
27th Jul 2018 7:11am
Brava Rachelle! The sight of noble polar bears reduced to skin and bone is heartbreaking and an undeniable wake up call.
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