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What The World Should Be
Love me, hate me, set me free
Show me what the world should be.
A place you don’t lose what you love.
Where happiness soars above.
One where joy is all around.
A place where lost ones all are found.
A world that’s colorful, bright and fun.
Not filled with darkness from everyone.
Where anything you say is heard.
A place where hate is not a word.
A lovely world, unlike my own.
The place I wish I could’ve gone.
Show me what the world should be.
A place you don’t lose what you love.
Where happiness soars above.
One where joy is all around.
A place where lost ones all are found.
A world that’s colorful, bright and fun.
Not filled with darkness from everyone.
Where anything you say is heard.
A place where hate is not a word.
A lovely world, unlike my own.
The place I wish I could’ve gone.
Published 14th Oct 2011
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14th Oct 2011 6:10pm
14th Oct 2011 6:17pm
The world is a complex place. You really can´t have a world where there is no hate. We all have our dark sides as well as our positive sides. Part of growning as a person is confronting the darkness in the world and within ourselves and defeating it before it has a chance to fester and overwehlm us. Wishing something away doesn´t fix anything
18th Oct 2011 10:01pm
