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Distraction
I still can’t keep my mind off your body
Every time I try
I stop and press rewind
I pause...
and suspend in time
And drink in your beauty
Like a sip of fine wine
I know I said
I didn’t want anything serious
But I’m seriously rethinking that decision
As I navigated your body
With precision
And our
Climaxes
Crashed into a collision
I couldn’t help but feel
That it would be a shame
For this to only happen once
Tell me if you feel the same
Or was this simply...
A one night stand?
Every time I try
I stop and press rewind
I pause...
and suspend in time
And drink in your beauty
Like a sip of fine wine
I know I said
I didn’t want anything serious
But I’m seriously rethinking that decision
As I navigated your body
With precision
And our
Climaxes
Crashed into a collision
I couldn’t help but feel
That it would be a shame
For this to only happen once
Tell me if you feel the same
Or was this simply...
A one night stand?
Published 8th May 2018
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8th May 2018 1:51pm
Hmmm ... you capture this feeling so well ... you can feel the longing ... bravo my poet
8th May 2018 2:04pm
Thanks eg, I was sitting here needing to write (not wanting to work) and this is first thing that came to mind.
8th May 2018 2:40pm
Hard for me to write when I'm teaching ... though I do let poems ferment when my students are in shavasana
8th May 2018 2:58pm
Staring at a bunch of women in compromising poses in yoga pants would definitely help me come up with poetry!
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8th May 2018 10:38pm
Poignant moment, when the sex has been so enjoyable he reconsiders his commitment (or lack of it) and wonders if this is the start of something longer term - or not? Favourite lines, for their expression of this dilemma:
I know I said
I didn’t want anything serious
But I’m seriously rethinking that decision
I know I said
I didn’t want anything serious
But I’m seriously rethinking that decision
8th May 2018 10:55pm
9th May 2018 6:33am
As the pic shows, she looks someone a man would want to engage with again and again.....
10th May 2018 6:49am
I have just posted a poem inspired by the accompanying pic, titled Lazy Afternoon in this section, an imagining of what was going on and what it led to.
10th May 2018 3:32pm
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12th May 2018 10:57am
Good write - the sip of fine wine overused cliché lets it down a little - but I very much liked it nonetheless
12th May 2018 11:08am
