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Tanka: Quiet light
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the lanterns of boats
moving through warm evening mist
become fireflies
moving through warm evening mist
like the lanterns of boats
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Published 7th May 2018
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7th May 2018 5:00pm
7th May 2018 6:41pm
This could be a reflection on a pond in Japan. Fine wording and imagery to this short verse. Beautiful!
7th May 2018 10:05pm
8th May 2018 2:18am
8th May 2018 3:34am
Why thank you, El, how much I appreciate the bouquet you have given me.
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