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I Am
The mirror is a double-edged blade
It can either puncture my heart or fight off negativity
As I stare into my eyes of warm chocolate shade
I vainly ponder upon my identity.
Society tells me that I can be whomever I want
Yet when I try to express myself, I’m told that I’m doing it wrong
I stand up for what I believe in, yet their reaction is to taunt
I’m of a certain ethnicity; I don’t know any better, so I should just move along.
I remain silent, yet inwardly I’m losing my mind
Stop telling me what to do and what to think!
I may be inexperienced, but I’m not blind
People need to just relax and have a drink.
I am my own person
I am a human being with rights
Your violence and wrongly claimed accusations are only a burden
Stop spreading lies that everything bad is because of the whites.
We’re all human beings
Doesn’t matter the skin color or religion
Our blood’s all the same when we bleed
When we die for a war which cause was pure fiction.
It can either puncture my heart or fight off negativity
As I stare into my eyes of warm chocolate shade
I vainly ponder upon my identity.
Society tells me that I can be whomever I want
Yet when I try to express myself, I’m told that I’m doing it wrong
I stand up for what I believe in, yet their reaction is to taunt
I’m of a certain ethnicity; I don’t know any better, so I should just move along.
I remain silent, yet inwardly I’m losing my mind
Stop telling me what to do and what to think!
I may be inexperienced, but I’m not blind
People need to just relax and have a drink.
I am my own person
I am a human being with rights
Your violence and wrongly claimed accusations are only a burden
Stop spreading lies that everything bad is because of the whites.
We’re all human beings
Doesn’t matter the skin color or religion
Our blood’s all the same when we bleed
When we die for a war which cause was pure fiction.
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Re. I Am
My first inclination is to recommend some books to read... But I'm gonna shut up. You clearly know who you are and what is your potential. I'll just say I think you're a wonderful person, artist,poet, and teacher. Amen to what you've written.
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Re: Re. I Am
20th Jul 2018 11:50pm
Hola Gahddess. I'd appreciate you voting for this poem in the "I Am" competition.
Re. I Am
1st May 2018 2:33pm
Re: Re. I Am
20th Jul 2018 11:51pm
Hello Dragonfly. I'd appreciate you voting for this poem in the "I Am" competition.
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Re: Re. I Am
1st May 2018 5:13pm
Re. I Am
1st May 2018 6:14pm
In a time of racial injustice we need to be comfortable and honest in our own skin now more than ever. This is a nice poems and glad u fought through your own personal experience of adversity and rose to the top. Good job!
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Re: Re. I Am
1st May 2018 6:33pm
Re: Re. I Am
20th Jul 2018 11:51pm
Hey Libra. I'd appreciate you voting for this poem in the "I Am" competition.
Re: Re. I Am
4th May 2018 6:35pm
Following the majority doesn't mean they're right. Thanks for your comment!
Re. I Am
4th May 2018 11:22pm
by now me thought
you wouldv'e broken many a mirror
and wouldv'e come
with another one
O canadien
you wouldv'e broken many a mirror
and wouldv'e come
with another one
O canadien
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Re. I Am
11th Jun 2018 10:10pm
A brave poem to write within a society such as this, Certainly takes an ample amount of courage to know who you are,
and keep to it with societies opinion's. Great work, LunasChild8.
and keep to it with societies opinion's. Great work, LunasChild8.
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11th Jun 2018 10:21pm
Re: Re. I Am
20th Jul 2018 11:52pm
Hey Soulstream. I'd appreciate you voting for this poem in the "I Am" competition.