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Thunder shakes the house
trees in the backyard bend
punished by steady wind
raindrops reach a resounding climax
rat-tat-tatting Kamikazes
colliding with the window pane
brilliant diamonds
in blue streaks of lightening illuminated
Sprawled in my spot on the couch
watching repeats of home improvement shows
shamed by my lackluster handyman skills
brushing something ticklish from my cheek
a slip of paper dangles before my eyes
accompanied by a sweet whisper
“here’s your honey-do list dear”
damn-it is there no escape?
reading the single written item
my sluggish pulse races
“Do me” it reads
From behind the couch she appears
fresh from her shower
hair slicked back, cheeks faintly crimson
light pink skin peeking through
a white, loosely tied, terrycloth robe
perching on my lap
from my hand she quickly grabs my sceptre
clicking off the television
commanding me “GET TO WORK!”
In less than a blink
as if bewitched
my t-shirt and shorts
fall in a heap on the floor
the robe now loose
envelopes us like angel wings
waves of elation course through my frame
when our electrified flesh meets
we kiss and kiss and kiss
competing for the I-love-you-more prize
Devouring her erect ruby nipples
my firm hands cradling her perfect ass
slowly penetrating her heat
profoundly connected we dance
crescendoing moans escape her smiling lips
in a wondrous orgasmic aria
summoning deity we shudder and collapse
CHECK!
Published 29th Apr 2018
Author's Note
What to do when thunder's about Lightening strikes you just can't go out To venture outside perhaps electrocuted To make love inside I'm much better suited
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29th Apr 2018 6:07am
Sexy in its entirety! There is just something so dangerously appealing to get tangled up with the world going wild outside!
Well done!!! Mmm yes!
Always
Justafan of your
Well done!!! Mmm yes!
Always
Justafan of your
29th Apr 2018 6:19am
Yes ma'am, beautifully dangerous. I appreciate very much your comment. I am glad you enjoyed the piece. 😊
29th Apr 2018 6:36am
I love writing out those kinda lists!
Kinda my "good boy" list after the house chores list
I find he's more eager with his tools this way xoxo
Kinda my "good boy" list after the house chores list
I find he's more eager with his tools this way xoxo
29th Apr 2018 6:44am
29th Apr 2018 7:01pm
If this is a chore then give me more. A fine and funny erotic, down to the last "check!" I'm glad she's keeping you in line, Gahdess. Mistress or muse, she's inspired a gem.
29th Apr 2018 7:47pm
Yes sir I will never complain about this particular task...in fact the harder the better. I'm glad you like this piece. Cheers to you Sir Crow!
29th Apr 2018 9:11pm
Echo Justafan and Lookawaynow. Like the way his preoccupations are led to change from "Do-it-yourself" to "Do me yourself"!
Favourite phrase - "summoning deity" (ie ohmigod!)
Favourite phrase - "summoning deity" (ie ohmigod!)
29th Apr 2018 10:00pm
Thank you Solomon! I am glad you caught the "deity" message...I didn't know if it was too vague. I truly appreciate you comments.
29th Apr 2018 9:49pm
The "handy" man gripping his tool while thinking of the
Honey-Dew that awaits.
No fair weather thoughts expressed here
Loved the small poem you included in the "Author's Notes" also, it was a nice touch.
Well done.
Honey-Dew that awaits.
No fair weather thoughts expressed here
Loved the small poem you included in the "Author's Notes" also, it was a nice touch.
Well done.
29th Apr 2018 10:05pm
Teri, thank you! Because this was one of the poems I took off my gallery wall a while back I thought I'd add that little poem with the repost. "The Cat in the Hat inspired that little ditty. I appreciate your kind words of encouragement 😊❤️
1st May 2018 8:06pm
1st May 2018 8:21pm
The booming thunder and occasional lightening strike makes it a more thrilling experience. The jolts intensify tingles.
