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Still Here
You are gone but
The love we made
Still here where I lay
And no its not the same
It will never be the same
Before we see eye to eye
We gon' be side to side
The love we made
Still here where I lay
And no its not the same
It will never be the same
Before we see eye to eye
We gon' be side to side
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Re. Still Here
2nd May 2018 00:41am
Gotta see eye to eye first my friend before you can lay side by side. ;-)
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Re: Re. Still Here
2nd May 2018 2:22am
My word play here is reffering to ex lovers put in a situation where they have no choice but work together. Thetly dont see eye to eye as a couple by they are put back together (side to side).. Thats what it is meaning :). Thanks for the comment.
Re. Still Here
4th May 2018 11:03pm
its okay if the two r of same sex
otherwise twill be complex
both will perplex
is that what you wanted to convey
do say
otherwise twill be complex
both will perplex
is that what you wanted to convey
do say
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Re: Re. Still Here
4th May 2018 11:06pm
Hah nahh they not of the same sex. But you place it there if you want.
Re: Re. Still Here
4th May 2018 11:12pm
no I read poetry bi
by all bi's
GAYS and gays
and lesbians c lesbians
I don't bother
as to cummm
alongside they
cumm gather
by all bi's
GAYS and gays
and lesbians c lesbians
I don't bother
as to cummm
alongside they
cumm gather
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Re: Re. Still Here
4th May 2018 11:14pm
Ohhhhh haha i get what you're saying. You funny... I thought you were saying i was gay or something haha. I dont swing that way but i get what you're saying now
Re: Re. Still Here
4th May 2018 11:19pm
i make no insinuations
sexiness/sexoticity
is utterly private
as was once in cabins
the word slipped out again
yes closets
always cum to mind again and again
poetic do remain
read again's
sexiness/sexoticity
is utterly private
as was once in cabins
the word slipped out again
yes closets
always cum to mind again and again
poetic do remain
read again's
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Re: Re. Still Here
4th May 2018 11:26pm
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