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Fledgling
A garden overgrown with weeds
A stone bench deeply stained
A marble Aphrodite gleams
Her face crumbled by time
Moonlight filters through the clouds
Chasing lost and vagrant shadows
A nocturnal child comes to rest
Disdaining girlhood games
She trills the rarest nursery rhyme
Its lines regarding ogres
And a witch's wicked eye
Night's emissaries comfort her
Telling her that she will grow
Compose lines of grace and shadows
The dark that she will know.
A stone bench deeply stained
A marble Aphrodite gleams
Her face crumbled by time
Moonlight filters through the clouds
Chasing lost and vagrant shadows
A nocturnal child comes to rest
Disdaining girlhood games
She trills the rarest nursery rhyme
Its lines regarding ogres
And a witch's wicked eye
Night's emissaries comfort her
Telling her that she will grow
Compose lines of grace and shadows
The dark that she will know.
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Oh ... this poem just fits the day I’m having ... full of dark spirits ... gotta go on the RL ...
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26th Apr 2018 6:34pm
I just hope those spirits aren't too troublesome. Thank you so much LilDragonFly!
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26th Apr 2018 7:01pm
Haunting, yes, haunting is the perfect word to describe this piece filled with decaying imagery and eerie storytelling. Does that mean I have to muster a chiller as well 😗 Bravo Sir Crow.
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26th Apr 2018 7:44pm
You don't have to, Gahdess. I enjoy all your work, chilling, warm, erotic, nostalgic. Thank you!
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26th Apr 2018 8:43pm
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29th Apr 2018 7:21pm
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- Edited 27th Apr 2018 2:23am
27th Apr 2018 2:17am
Hey Crow......what an awesome thought provoking ink.....gave me a mystery feeling ..luv it......purple luv & hugs xo :)
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29th Apr 2018 7:22pm
Glad you enjoyed, Flower. Seems to me this is more your type of write than my usual stuff.
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29th Apr 2018 7:24pm
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29th Apr 2018 7:21pm
Vividly Vandalizing,Crow.....this sweet poison a blood drop from Edgar A. Poe.
Sweet ink! ;)
Sweet ink! ;)
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29th Apr 2018 7:25pm