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The Honey Trap
He buys her a martini dry
Raises his own to her good health
She then smiles, replies in kind
Already knowing that he's trapped
One more mark, one more enrapt
He takes her home in his RV
Pours some Stoli on the rocks
They sip, and they soon both agree
That they will play it as it lays
After one more drink to better days
In bed he can pick up her scent
A sweetness that can't quite be placed
He lowers his head between her thighs
Licks nectar from her lower lips
And all restraint and reason slips
She smiles and tightens up her thighs
Listening to his muffled cries
She just doesn't seem to care
Let him be blue for lack of air.
Raises his own to her good health
She then smiles, replies in kind
Already knowing that he's trapped
One more mark, one more enrapt
He takes her home in his RV
Pours some Stoli on the rocks
They sip, and they soon both agree
That they will play it as it lays
After one more drink to better days
In bed he can pick up her scent
A sweetness that can't quite be placed
He lowers his head between her thighs
Licks nectar from her lower lips
And all restraint and reason slips
She smiles and tightens up her thighs
Listening to his muffled cries
She just doesn't seem to care
Let him be blue for lack of air.
Published 29th Apr 2018
Author's Note
Thought I'd try combining noir with horror. The lady here might not be entirely human but knows the score.
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29th Apr 2018 7:15pm
1st May 2018 7:00pm
29th Apr 2018 8:29pm
Sir Crow, I like the trapped enrapt rhyme. And what a sweet ride this guy offers Winnebago bliss 😎 I guess you can say this femme fatale's vise 🗜️ is sex with strangers 😁 She just can't let go. Bravo!
1st May 2018 7:02pm
With the title having overtones of spying as well as film noir, reminds me of the Bond villain girl Xenia Onatopp whose bedtime piece was crushing men between her thighs (which she failed to do with Bond).
1st May 2018 7:04pm
I see your point. I believe Xenia was played by Grace Jones, if memory serves. Thanks Solomon!
2nd May 2018 6:49am
You're a decade or so back - Xenia Onatopp was played by Famke Janssen, when the Bond was Pierce Brosnan.
Oooo, wicked, my crowfly friend. Deliciously wicked.
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30th Apr 2018 3:35pm
My Lovely Sir Crow, for some reason I had a feeling this would end somewhat tragically...you can always add the perfect darkened spin to classic noir *evil grins* I love you! With much love - Taryn xoxo
1st May 2018 7:06pm
Hopefully the tragedy is tempered by black humor. I wrote myself blue in the face. Thanks Taryn!
