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Right where the night meets the dawn / Word is bond / So aware of so much beyond / Bare notes live between our palms / Shared point of calm / The narrative I’m on bridges overstanding daily / Nightly stammering before language babies / Man and lady, unplanned relating but elevation in every access gaping / Lucid awakening / Pronounced change, sound escaping moves through tantric pounding overtaking unto screams / Sometimes just from a daydream….
Published 24th Apr 2018
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26th Apr 2018 10:59am
ah.."Lucid awakening / Pronounced change, sound escaping moves through tantric pounding overtaking unto screams"..intense...Loki...the needful awakening of the senses..may it be the dreams or daydreams or visions ..
this reads so much in tranquil & beauty..
write on:)
this reads so much in tranquil & beauty..
write on:)
17th May 2018 3:15am
the needful awakening of the senses..may it be the dreams or daydreams or visions ..
Can we collab off that topic? It's a nuance that behooves unpacking...
Can we collab off that topic? It's a nuance that behooves unpacking...
26th Apr 2018 7:40pm
Such intensity, then a mellow last line. I like the way you eschew formal stanza structure for a more compact form. Part of your inimitable style!
17th May 2018 3:16am
Iconoclastic is the license of the auto-didactic. Thanks for your receptivity Crow.
