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Heart Cries
Sitting here …on this absolutely
Gorgeous day …alone
Sky is a soft blue,
Pelicans and Seagulls rest on pilings
Or
Sail above me,
Occasionally diving for a treat
Warm gentle breeze comes in off the gulf
Whipping my hair into a mess
Days like this are meant to be shared
With someone you love
The perfect day for lovers
Where are you? …my heart cries
Published 23rd Apr 2018
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23rd Apr 2018 9:37pm
23rd Apr 2018 9:47pm
Tender hearts we have, my fellow poetess🌹
I pray is well on your retreat 😊
Always
Justafan
Missy
I pray is well on your retreat 😊
Always
Justafan
Missy
23rd Apr 2018 10:02pm
beautiful snapshot of a wistful moment...and I'm so happy you used off instead of the increasingly annoying 'off of'..beautiful language...liked the read
24th Apr 2018 1:29am
My time on another site taught me to CUT nonessential words.
I really appreciate that you noticed that 🌹
Always
Justafan
~M~
I really appreciate that you noticed that 🌹
Always
Justafan
~M~
Anonymous
- Edited 30th Jul 2018 7:47am
24th Apr 2018 00:41am
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24th Apr 2018 1:33am
When I saw this picture, I knew this would be a poem!
It just flowed out once my pen touched paper 🌹
Thank you for such a lovely review .
Always
Justafan
~M~
It just flowed out once my pen touched paper 🌹
Thank you for such a lovely review .
Always
Justafan
~M~
24th Apr 2018 1:23am
24th Apr 2018 1:36am
Life is filled with mysteries :)
Thank you so much for this lovely review!
Always
Justafan
~M~
Thank you so much for this lovely review!
Always
Justafan
~M~
27th Apr 2018 9:58pm
quite lovely :-) i enjoyed reading this .. seagulls and pelicans, i love how you mentioned birds in this poem
