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When I look into the mirror, I see an upset stranger
I ask him why he is unhappy
he never answers...
I ask him why he is unhappy
he never answers...
Published 22nd Apr 2018
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23rd Apr 2018 8:44am
Why so short?
Here's one of my short ones:
"I spend my days
spent and in a daze."
Here's one of my short ones:
"I spend my days
spent and in a daze."
23rd Apr 2018 9:08am
can't blame him for not answering, he's upset.....
next time, don't look in the mirror, close your eyes, try to see him within, and ask again.
Thank you for sharing
next time, don't look in the mirror, close your eyes, try to see him within, and ask again.
Thank you for sharing
23rd Apr 2018 10:15pm
24th Apr 2018 1:24pm
I hope you find the answer one day, Juke. This is quite a sad read but an ever-popular theme as more people than ever are seemingly struggling with their identity.
