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Esctasy's Agony
Bruise my ribs with laughs & kisses
The bronze spray of a Sun slain
Dying for the inky night
Even then I am warm
Of it's resurrection in your eyes
Thus have my own dollop of rays & twilight
The porcelain of my skin
Is painted with promises spoken
By strong strokes of fingers
& smooth slips of lips
Drenched in drawls of pure animal aggression
Your tame arctic
Only drools fuel on my kiln attraction
Dare me like a stubborn candle wick
Refusing to flick nor submit.
SE. P.4.14.18.
The bronze spray of a Sun slain
Dying for the inky night
Even then I am warm
Of it's resurrection in your eyes
Thus have my own dollop of rays & twilight
The porcelain of my skin
Is painted with promises spoken
By strong strokes of fingers
& smooth slips of lips
Drenched in drawls of pure animal aggression
Your tame arctic
Only drools fuel on my kiln attraction
Dare me like a stubborn candle wick
Refusing to flick nor submit.
SE. P.4.14.18.
Published 14th Apr 2018
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I'm a little shy about this....:)
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14th Apr 2018 11:03am
Oh this is really good ... "smooth slips of lips" ... "Dare me like a stubborn candle wick/Refusing to flick nor submit" ...
14th Apr 2018 11:25am
14th Apr 2018 1:12pm
Hello Sea, I don't typically read or reply to erotica for the same reason, I blush 20 shades of cherry ice egads, however I seen you were here this morning & I couldn't wait to see if you were posting again, I've read all your work and love your unique talent and impressive skill set. Now then, the subtleness, the quiet whisper of need, want made this write sexy yet highly tasteful, excellent work Sea, so glad I am able to hear your voice again. Mad Mad Respect,
Shadow_Dancer💫
Shadow_Dancer💫
14th Apr 2018 4:01pm
Creatively sensational. Unique sassy poem. I like the wordplay as well. Cool poetics. Kudos.
I'm quite a newbie here, Pleez do write your thoughts under my newest poem too, I've been interacting with poets for ages, I like doing it to show the positives of others poems.
I'm quite a newbie here, Pleez do write your thoughts under my newest poem too, I've been interacting with poets for ages, I like doing it to show the positives of others poems.
14th Apr 2018 4:54pm
27th Apr 2018 4:07pm
27th Apr 2018 4:11pm
Thanx.The title was my inspiration.....before,I DID NOT UNDERSTAND how it could''hurt so good''....now?I am a willing hostage of that sensation. lol
