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Petite robe noire
Every once in a while I come by
to see if you've been drifting through
the black and white. I figure, just like the perfect poem,
good company is hard to find.
Makes me think poetry is easier to catch than to write.
There's enough here to light up a rainy night,
quench a thirsty thought, so I bust through
the lines like a woman on the prowl.
Too bad a great pair of legs doesn't mean much
when you're chasing the muse.
She runs, oh how she runs.
I watch her go and she is exquisite.
Maybe you've seen her
sitting in the smokey corner of a back alley dive,
having a stiff drink across from a fallen soldier
with a wicked appetite and a bad case of lonely.
Sometimes she is the moon, others the night
and when the darkness fits just right,
she is the stars.
to see if you've been drifting through
the black and white. I figure, just like the perfect poem,
good company is hard to find.
Makes me think poetry is easier to catch than to write.
There's enough here to light up a rainy night,
quench a thirsty thought, so I bust through
the lines like a woman on the prowl.
Too bad a great pair of legs doesn't mean much
when you're chasing the muse.
She runs, oh how she runs.
I watch her go and she is exquisite.
Maybe you've seen her
sitting in the smokey corner of a back alley dive,
having a stiff drink across from a fallen soldier
with a wicked appetite and a bad case of lonely.
Sometimes she is the moon, others the night
and when the darkness fits just right,
she is the stars.
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Re. Petite robe noire
‘Makes me think poetry is easier to catch than to write.‘
Great line!
I wouldn’t underestimate the role of a great pair of legs in lining up muses.
I also really loved: ‘quench a thirsty thought’
How many parched thoughts we carry!
Nice job.
Great line!
I wouldn’t underestimate the role of a great pair of legs in lining up muses.
I also really loved: ‘quench a thirsty thought’
How many parched thoughts we carry!
Nice job.
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16th Apr 2018 2:55pm
A great pair of legs can go a long way, can't it?
Thank you for such a great comment, I really appreciate you taking the time to leave some feedback...
Thank you for such a great comment, I really appreciate you taking the time to leave some feedback...
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13th Apr 2018 12:22pm
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16th Apr 2018 2:56pm
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Anonymous
13th Apr 2018 2:50pm
She's a cheetah, that fleet-footed muse. I love how you capture the essence of so much in so few lines. I picture that cheetah muse running wildly by the light of the moon. Your words are always beautiful, lovely Kasai
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16th Apr 2018 3:02pm
And your comments, sweet lady, are always beautiful as well.
A cheetah, yes, clever and quick, I couldn't have said it better myself.
Thank you for such a thoughtful visit, and for the smile that came along with it...
A cheetah, yes, clever and quick, I couldn't have said it better myself.
Thank you for such a thoughtful visit, and for the smile that came along with it...
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14th Apr 2018 4:39am
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25th Apr 2018 11:43pm
Always love your feedback PR, you have some amazing poetry and the input is very much appreciated. The artwork; I knew the second I saw it that it fit perfectly.
Thank you so much, apologies for the late response...
Thank you so much, apologies for the late response...
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14th Apr 2018 5:42am
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25th Apr 2018 11:48pm
Always enjoy hearing your thoughts, wise one, it makes coming back that much more enjoyable...
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16th Apr 2018 3:26pm
Wow, just love this Kasai...Sometimes she is the moon, others the night
and when the darkness fits just right,
she is the stars... phenomenal
and when the darkness fits just right,
she is the stars... phenomenal
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25th Apr 2018 11:52pm
Thank you so much for such a great comment Tim, very kind of you to leave me with your thoughts. Apologies for the slow reply, still getting settled in to my new place. It was nice to hear from you...
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29th Sep 2018 10:44pm
What a beautiful comment, PoetWarrior
thank you so much for taking the time to visit...
thank you so much for taking the time to visit...
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Oh that picture....she completed everything so perfectly. Perhaps we enjoy the chase as much as the end result?
Thanks for the kind visit and a place on the list..
Thanks for the kind visit and a place on the list..
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16th May 2022 3:00am