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Stalker
I will be close to thee
by catwalk so carefully
with my will and thought
through ten thousand miles
Not to wake you up
kiss you on the seductive lips
and seal my love in your dreams
I’m a Chinese kunoichi at large
skilled at counterespionage
mask and dress in black
sneak out in the dark
penetrate into your tissue layer
listen to your inner chatter
watch your sleep gesture
whisper my vows into your ear
Trust me, my restless sleeper
I won’t disturb your light slumber
I can lull your fears of a bad dreamer
I can cease the churning of your sorrow
I can stop the floods of your thoughts
I can sing a lullaby when you turn and toss
When you are sound asleep
I’m a tactful secret agent
In your subconsciousness
decipher what you have suffered
decode your passion code
record your sleep talk
Undress to iron your scars
Hold you tight through the night
Cause I love your everything
I would love to be unseen
At our time zones upside down
beside you before your dawn
Would rather be a sneaky stalker
cast away the daybreaker
Follow your mind trace
into your solo universe
by catwalk so carefully
with my will and thought
through ten thousand miles
Not to wake you up
kiss you on the seductive lips
and seal my love in your dreams
I’m a Chinese kunoichi at large
skilled at counterespionage
mask and dress in black
sneak out in the dark
penetrate into your tissue layer
listen to your inner chatter
watch your sleep gesture
whisper my vows into your ear
Trust me, my restless sleeper
I won’t disturb your light slumber
I can lull your fears of a bad dreamer
I can cease the churning of your sorrow
I can stop the floods of your thoughts
I can sing a lullaby when you turn and toss
When you are sound asleep
I’m a tactful secret agent
In your subconsciousness
decipher what you have suffered
decode your passion code
record your sleep talk
Undress to iron your scars
Hold you tight through the night
Cause I love your everything
I would love to be unseen
At our time zones upside down
beside you before your dawn
Would rather be a sneaky stalker
cast away the daybreaker
Follow your mind trace
into your solo universe
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Re. Stalker
11th Apr 2018 2:30am
absolutely delightful Jasmine...to be stalked by such a one would be a blessing....a thrilling tale...loved it...
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Re: Re. Stalker
11th Apr 2018 2:34am
Dear Lawrence, nice to have your read and kind words. Life is challenging and made me feel exhausted, but I can find some fun on writing.
Thank you so much for the nice feedback.
love
Jasmine
Thank you so much for the nice feedback.
love
Jasmine
Re. Stalker
Anonymous
11th Apr 2018 2:32am
Wow Rose........how absolutely brilliant is this.......I was scared in the beginning......couldn’t help but think that stalker better watch out.......then as I read to the end and it turned so gracefully passionate......very creative ink.....enjoyed......purple luv & hugs xo :)
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Re: Re. Stalker
11th Apr 2018 2:38am
Haha my dear Flowergirl, I didn't mean to scare you. I had some fun writing this and enjoyed the fantasy.
Thank you so much for the always nice feedback. Love love love you!
luv & hugs xo :)
Jasmine
Thank you so much for the always nice feedback. Love love love you!
luv & hugs xo :)
Jasmine
Re. Stalker
dear rose,
this is very moving and touches my soul.... this is truly a dreamer's dream. passionate beyond words.... that stalker; she has a beautiful soul
this is very moving and touches my soul.... this is truly a dreamer's dream. passionate beyond words.... that stalker; she has a beautiful soul
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Re: Re. Stalker
11th Apr 2018 2:45am
Dear Peace, so glad you felt so much. That has proved that you have a special soul too.
You know I cherish your words which are rarely seen here.
Thank you so much for the RL add. as well.
love
Jasmine
You know I cherish your words which are rarely seen here.
Thank you so much for the RL add. as well.
love
Jasmine
Re: Re. Stalker
11th Apr 2018 2:48am
Haha Tim. you had better leave the light on in case, but you still wouldn't see because I am invisible.
Thank you so much for the nice feedback.
love
Jasmine
Thank you so much for the nice feedback.
love
Jasmine
Re. Stalker
11th Apr 2018 3:35am
Such a lovely write!
A sweet stalker that..
I would want to have...
respects & love,
H
A sweet stalker that..
I would want to have...
respects & love,
H
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Re: Re. Stalker
11th Apr 2018 3:54pm
Dear H, glad to have your read.
Your kind words are so encouraging!
Just found some fun writing this way.
Thank you so much!
love
Jasmine
Your kind words are so encouraging!
Just found some fun writing this way.
Thank you so much!
love
Jasmine
Re. Stalker
11th Apr 2018 3:46am
Great job! I love, love, love the passage
"in your subconsciousness
decipher what you have suffered
decode your passion code
record your sleep talk
Undress to iron your scars
Hold you tight through the night"
Especially, oh my yes the "Undress to iron your scars" Amazing!
"in your subconsciousness
decipher what you have suffered
decode your passion code
record your sleep talk
Undress to iron your scars
Hold you tight through the night"
Especially, oh my yes the "Undress to iron your scars" Amazing!
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Re: Re. Stalker
11th Apr 2018 4:06pm
Hey Seed, your words really encourage me. I feel excited when reading your comment.
Glad you enjoyed reading this.
Thank you so much!
love
Jasmine
Glad you enjoyed reading this.
Thank you so much!
love
Jasmine
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i'm not afraid of this stalker...seems a nice one to me....this is wonderful stuff girly
"Trust me, my restless sleeper
I won’t disturb your light slumber
I can lull your fears of a bad dreamer
I can cease the churning of your sorrow
I can stop the floods of your thoughts
I can sing a lullaby when you turn and toss"
such a blessing to have action like this from a lover
love always
jeff
"Trust me, my restless sleeper
I won’t disturb your light slumber
I can lull your fears of a bad dreamer
I can cease the churning of your sorrow
I can stop the floods of your thoughts
I can sing a lullaby when you turn and toss"
such a blessing to have action like this from a lover
love always
jeff
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Re: Re. Stalker
11th Apr 2018 4:18pm
I will do any of them if you want me so...
Glad you enjoyed reading this stuff.
Love your nice feedback my dear Jeff.
love always
Jasmine
Glad you enjoyed reading this stuff.
Love your nice feedback my dear Jeff.
love always
Jasmine
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Re: Re. Stalker
11th Apr 2018 4:34pm
Oh, a "konuichi" or "kunoichi", thank you for telling me there is a term for a female ninja.
Wondering why you know so many things about Japan.
Thank you so much for the read and commenting.
love
Jasmine
Wondering why you know so many things about Japan.
Thank you so much for the read and commenting.
love
Jasmine
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11th Apr 2018 11:58am
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11th Apr 2018 4:39pm
Dear Danny, I will stalk you if you need me to...
I know sometimes I have crazy fantasies, but they make me feel nice...
Thank you so much for the read and leaving such a nice comment.
love
Jasmine
I know sometimes I have crazy fantasies, but they make me feel nice...
Thank you so much for the read and leaving such a nice comment.
love
Jasmine
Re. Stalker
11th Apr 2018 11:50pm
Very interesting marriage of subtle syllabic rhyme and a sultry, seductive message. Enjoyed this.
Daniel
Daniel
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Re: Re. Stalker
12th Apr 2018 1:47am
Dear Daniel, love to read your creative comment. Oh "marriage" is an interesting word for saying combination.
Thank you so much for the positive feedback.
love
Jasmine
Thank you so much for the positive feedback.
love
Jasmine
Re. Stalker
13th Apr 2018 4:08pm
I too like how this starts off scary ... then unfolds its desire ... well done my sweet poetess
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Re: Re. Stalker
13th Apr 2018 4:27pm
My dear LilDragonFly, the suspense of this was a surprise. I didn't mean to do it. Glad you liked it. Just like to watch some kung Fu dramas, then came up with this idea.
Thank you so much for the nice feedback!
love
Jasmine
Thank you so much for the nice feedback!
love
Jasmine
Re. Stalker
14th Apr 2018 8:27am
Oh my this is a sensational sassy poem, wow to be stalked in such a creative poetic harmless way would make even stalking sound awesome. Your dreamy talent shines imaginatively charming here. Kudos I must say.
Soo nice to read from u again, do Pleez write your thoughts under my newest poem too, titled, "scenery medley contrasts".
Soo nice to read from u again, do Pleez write your thoughts under my newest poem too, titled, "scenery medley contrasts".
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Re: Re. Stalker
15th Apr 2018 4:08am
Dear Zay, so glad you felt this so much. I guess through your sensational heart, you have given it more seductive imagination than what I would have wanted to pen :)
Thank you so much for the nice feedback.
love
RoseJasmine
Thank you so much for the nice feedback.
love
RoseJasmine
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Anonymous
18th Apr 2018 11:09am
Hooked in from the start and heart warm by the end - Perfect :)
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Re: Re. Stalker
18th Apr 2018 12:23pm
"Perfect" is a great word for me dear Sophie.
Thank you so much for sending this warm message to me. It made me happy!
love
RoseJasmine
Thank you so much for sending this warm message to me. It made me happy!
love
RoseJasmine