cruel lover

I often long for just one more fix but it never stops at one does it? sigh to be without our internal and external pain again..I too miss taking that elevator all the way to the ground..it never ends..you painted the picture of the beautiful feeling it gives you so well..as well as the cruelty of that lover..excellent poem..

i believed in your magic    
my promise to you infectious    
when your inside me    
i have to remember to breathe    
pain-free    
so-free    
free?    
your love is not    
the cost to much    
still,i want    
to taste you in my veins    
i can not quit you    
the cruel lover    
who keeps me begging
always for more    
heroin    

A potent magic it is..brilliant poem
peace Crim

my compliments have been stolen by the one just above, though I've never done anything quite as hard. I thought the potentcy of your words were just brilliant though. You might agree with this phrase but you might not. "Through unimaginable pain comes release" I think you really embodied that in your words, once again you could use a little bit of puctuality but still a truly passionate piece of work

Keep it up

A Nameless Traveler