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at some point, in time
the moment
will arrive
the one
you've been waiting for
all your life
and
the childhood will be
the recurring dream
fading away
yet
the high spirits
of the youth
will be the distraction
if not destruction
and this too
will
in the end
be just a point
in time
in time
it will be
the point
where
it
will be
time
back
to
dot
.
will arrive
the one
you've been waiting for
all your life
and
the childhood will be
the recurring dream
fading away
yet
the high spirits
of the youth
will be the distraction
if not destruction
and this too
will
in the end
be just a point
in time
in time
it will be
the point
where
it
will be
time
back
to
dot
.
Published 9th Apr 2018
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9th Apr 2018 12:33pm
moment, point, time, dot...how you have used that says of the punched standards of a ticking mind...seems this mind will never stop wrapping the memories n mystical infinities into thay bracket that's all but fades unlike our deepening consciousness n soul's eternal traverse..
I ponder n blabber as ev..but your wordful art inspires more depth...
this is consise yet immense in what it says..
I ponder n blabber as ev..but your wordful art inspires more depth...
this is consise yet immense in what it says..
honor!
extreme.
for an artist admired's words are but utterly humbling.
some reflections on moments, points, times past and the ever-closing dot, they ganged up and extracted these thoughts. nothing more.
the
wonder
is and in
the eye of the beholder!!
appreciation.
immense.
extreme.
for an artist admired's words are but utterly humbling.
some reflections on moments, points, times past and the ever-closing dot, they ganged up and extracted these thoughts. nothing more.
the
wonder
is and in
the eye of the beholder!!
appreciation.
immense.
11th Apr 2018 7:15pm
Everybody needs reminding of how short & fickle life can and is. Deep thoughts written provoked my own in thought. Mad Respect,
me
me
11th Apr 2018 7:35pm
reminding..i say timely reminder is all we need, for most of us know most of the things...somehow we forget, util reminded. This was, a reminder for self more than anyone else I have to admit.
Welcome
is the peer admired.
Welcome
is the review kind.
appreciation.
immense.
Welcome
is the peer admired.
Welcome
is the review kind.
appreciation.
immense.
Sublime muse here , the beginning and back to square one, yeah that's what seems life. You expressed it so poetically. Kudos.
Soo nice to read from u again, do Pleez write your thoughts under my newest poem too, titled, "scenery medley contrasts".
Soo nice to read from u again, do Pleez write your thoughts under my newest poem too, titled, "scenery medley contrasts".
14th Apr 2018 9:57am
welcome
is the peer admired
welcome
is the review, kind.
well...at some point, in time indeed.
honored for the appreciation and the visit.
both held close.
is the peer admired
welcome
is the review, kind.
well...at some point, in time indeed.
honored for the appreciation and the visit.
both held close.
22nd Apr 2018 00:47am
It all depends on how old you are when you're reading this poem but In my case at 48, that time is already a point. Yes, I agree that thinking back to our youth can cause a tearful reaction etc. Back to the dot ultimately. Nice work, sobering words my friend.
22nd Apr 2018 9:38am
welcome
is the Friend Admired
Welcome
is the review, deep & insightful.
yes dear Friend, same here, at 38 I believe i am at that point too. Yes, nostalgia and the emotional dam that is memory both remind us of the childhood and yes it is inevitable, our return to the dot. Sobering words, were primarily aimed at self more than anyone else dear friend.
apprecaite immensely
your visit
the review!!
is the Friend Admired
Welcome
is the review, deep & insightful.
yes dear Friend, same here, at 38 I believe i am at that point too. Yes, nostalgia and the emotional dam that is memory both remind us of the childhood and yes it is inevitable, our return to the dot. Sobering words, were primarily aimed at self more than anyone else dear friend.
apprecaite immensely
your visit
the review!!
