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a visual poem
or a poem's visual
that is
what it was
you may call it a gesture in & of movement
by the sea
under the sky of blues
from where it poured the spherical darts
with the wind's swirl in unison
this was his dance
they said
how wrong
they knew not
that it was
a visual poem
him
becoming the confluence
of elements
in trance
his feet
in assimilation with the squelched red
the darts-the liquid blossoms kissing the skin relentless
the gales the gusts becoming him
what's unseen - the fire within
his dermis where it touched and kissed
the gales the clay the aqua
and that is where
the poem glowed it's brightest
some called it
a ball lightning
some saw it
a flash that's green
no one knew
what it was
no one knew
the unfolded scence
simple thing they knew not
it was only
a poem seen
© cold_fusion 2018. All rights reserved.
Published 10th Apr 2018
| Edited 13th Apr 2018
Author's Note
A lover's poem not in words but in an expression visual in unison with the elements.
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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Beautiful the poem seen, and only those who listened to his dance, could appreciate the message within the words, sewn into stanzas which flowed from the joy he experienced.
A very apt presentation for your 300th day here.
Congratulations, my friend.
Blessed we have been by your presence
A very apt presentation for your 300th day here.
Congratulations, my friend.
Blessed we have been by your presence
11th Apr 2018 7:38pm
...and joy
is exactly what he experienced.
bull's eye!
welcome
is the Friend Admired!
Welcome
is the Poet!
and re the 300 days...well astute is the Friend, indeed.
each day a blessing, the company of such generous and kindred spirits!!
Thank You T!!
is exactly what he experienced.
bull's eye!
welcome
is the Friend Admired!
Welcome
is the Poet!
and re the 300 days...well astute is the Friend, indeed.
each day a blessing, the company of such generous and kindred spirits!!
Thank You T!!
11th Apr 2018 1:39pm
This was a very creatively composed piece bro! Very impressively presented :)
11th Apr 2018 7:39pm
welcome
dear Poet admired!!
humbled and honored
at the same time
by your visit
and the kind review.
appreciation
deep
&
immense!!
dear Poet admired!!
humbled and honored
at the same time
by your visit
and the kind review.
appreciation
deep
&
immense!!
11th Apr 2018 6:58pm
I didn't know of your 300th on this day, Congrats. I love the journey of self reflection you take the reader on found in so many of your writings, this being no different. You my friend are a true weaver of imagery. What I love the most in this Poem is the quite beauty of self awareness, the epitome of your very creation. Mad Mad Respect,
me
me
11th Apr 2018 7:43pm
welcome
is the Friend admired.
Welcome
is the review affectionate.
in all honesty, the imagery is all in the eyes of the Peers here, for they see even what i often fail to fully convey with my jumbled words.
Respect, and honor is for the friends here! and it is deep.
warm regards
is the Friend admired.
Welcome
is the review affectionate.
in all honesty, the imagery is all in the eyes of the Peers here, for they see even what i often fail to fully convey with my jumbled words.
Respect, and honor is for the friends here! and it is deep.
warm regards
