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The WIDE DOOR
With forgiveness
love
trampled pride
the door to my heart
I threw open wide . .
but my Loves , love
did not venture or stride . .
A love that was true,
still growing inside
became hindered and lost . .
oh how it cried !
The pain that fell . .
like rain on the leaf
gave glimpse to the watcher,
the sadness and grief
Of a true love . . . lost . .
or taken by the thief
love
trampled pride
the door to my heart
I threw open wide . .
but my Loves , love
did not venture or stride . .
A love that was true,
still growing inside
became hindered and lost . .
oh how it cried !
The pain that fell . .
like rain on the leaf
gave glimpse to the watcher,
the sadness and grief
Of a true love . . . lost . .
or taken by the thief
Published 4th Apr 2018
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5th Apr 2018 1:35am
Ah, life sometimes---kicks you when you let your guard down, but onward we go anyway. Great write!
5th Apr 2018 3:23am
Thank you so much for reading , and thinking that it is a ‘Great Write’
Truly , I thank you !
Truly , I thank you !
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- Edited 26th May 2018 6:48pm
5th Apr 2018 3:36am
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Anonymous
7th Apr 2018 6:02pm
Hey Robert......beautiful wording all thru this.....very vivid........unfortunately it’s not hard to feel you’ve lived the pain that flows they this.......very expressive ink......purple luv & hugs xo :)
