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Judas
Silently imploding
My soul's corroding
Secretly divulging
Treachery unfolding
You’re no angel
And I’m no saint
A game is playing
And I’m betraying
My souls decaying
I’ll soon be paying
Trustworthy earnings
The tide is turning
You’re still not learning
While some ones yearning
The bottle’s exploding
My conscience overloading
What is this I’m sowing?
When you’re so unknowing
I’m no angel
And you’re no saint
Inside I’m screaming
Glass eyes gleaming
Your life I’m streaming
Behind the lies I’m weaving
I can’t believe I’m lying
When you’re still trying
I never want to see you crying
For redemption, I’m not vying
Tidal waves crashing
Promises I’m slashing
As the cigarette’s ashing
I’ll take that lashing
No, you’re no angel
And I’m no saint
I will be remembering
The end of this dismembering
It wasn’t just myself I was disassembling
Yeah... I’ll be remembering
That I’m no angel
And you’re so saint
© Indie Adams 2011
My soul's corroding
Secretly divulging
Treachery unfolding
You’re no angel
And I’m no saint
A game is playing
And I’m betraying
My souls decaying
I’ll soon be paying
Trustworthy earnings
The tide is turning
You’re still not learning
While some ones yearning
The bottle’s exploding
My conscience overloading
What is this I’m sowing?
When you’re so unknowing
I’m no angel
And you’re no saint
Inside I’m screaming
Glass eyes gleaming
Your life I’m streaming
Behind the lies I’m weaving
I can’t believe I’m lying
When you’re still trying
I never want to see you crying
For redemption, I’m not vying
Tidal waves crashing
Promises I’m slashing
As the cigarette’s ashing
I’ll take that lashing
No, you’re no angel
And I’m no saint
I will be remembering
The end of this dismembering
It wasn’t just myself I was disassembling
Yeah... I’ll be remembering
That I’m no angel
And you’re so saint
© Indie Adams 2011
Published 10th Oct 2011
| Edited 10th Mar 2012
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10th Oct 2011 1:21pm
Beautiful. I adore your way, you get completely caught in the rhyming web and just flow with it. It's effortless. 'Tidal waves crashing
Promises I’m slashing
As the cigarette’s ashing
I’ll take that lashing
No, you’re no angel
And I’m no saint
I will be remembering
The end of this dismembering
It wasn’t just myself I was disassembling
Yeah... I’ll be remembering
That I’m no angel
And you’re so saint' Well done!
Promises I’m slashing
As the cigarette’s ashing
I’ll take that lashing
No, you’re no angel
And I’m no saint
I will be remembering
The end of this dismembering
It wasn’t just myself I was disassembling
Yeah... I’ll be remembering
That I’m no angel
And you’re so saint' Well done!
11th Oct 2011 11:10am
10th Oct 2011 4:50pm
this flows so pefectly..you have a true talent Indie..
Inside I’m screaming
Glass eyes gleaming
Your life I’m streaming
Behind the lies I’m weaving
I can’t believe I’m lying
When you’re still trying
I never want to see you crying
For redemption, I’m not vying
Tidal waves crashing
Promises I’m slashing
As the cigarette’s ashing
I’ll take that lashing
No, you’re no angel
And I’m no saint
powerful and beautiful..peace Crim :)
Inside I’m screaming
Glass eyes gleaming
Your life I’m streaming
Behind the lies I’m weaving
I can’t believe I’m lying
When you’re still trying
I never want to see you crying
For redemption, I’m not vying
Tidal waves crashing
Promises I’m slashing
As the cigarette’s ashing
I’ll take that lashing
No, you’re no angel
And I’m no saint
powerful and beautiful..peace Crim :)
11th Oct 2011 11:11am
Anonymous
11th Oct 2011 4:47am
Wow, Indie! ^_^
11th Oct 2011 11:12am
