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I Am Out In Here
Suspension,
a scape of soul
it breathes;
tideless
time-eaten waves
The cavern stretches ever inward
I cannot find my eyes
Oh...where is the world today?
a scape of soul
it breathes;
tideless
time-eaten waves
The cavern stretches ever inward
I cannot find my eyes
Oh...where is the world today?
Published 3rd Apr 2018
Author's Note
Circa 2014...
Still relevant.
Still relevant.
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3rd Apr 2018 12:49pm
3rd Apr 2018 1:30pm
"it breathes;
tideless " - for only 3 words,i really like this line for some reason.
it kind of makes me want to go scream in caves or climb a crane.
great throwback Tuesday poem lol.
tideless " - for only 3 words,i really like this line for some reason.
it kind of makes me want to go scream in caves or climb a crane.
great throwback Tuesday poem lol.
4th Apr 2018 1:52am
Thank you dude :) I had cavernous feelings when I wrote this, I can't really explain it. But it's cool that you said this!
3rd Apr 2018 10:31pm
4th Apr 2018 1:52am
Yes. It was a "journal" entry on another site, but it never seemed irrelevant.
5th Apr 2018 10:05pm
I feel like this at least once a day (lol)
another beautiful write I hope you never run out :-))))))))))))))))))))))))))))
another beautiful write I hope you never run out :-))))))))))))))))))))))))))))
5th Apr 2018 11:28pm
