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Feed my Soul
The sun has long set on the world outside. Moonlight cascades dimly on our bodies as music softly shuffles in the background. The sweet sound of my body as it fuses with yours feeds my soul. The heavy panting in between the colliding of our lips and tongues. The breathless sighs as we entwine; finding yet another point of ecstasy over and over. Your warm teasing whispers against my ear. The way you hiss in between bites across my neck. The sound of your sex against mine as we we meet in perfect unison. Your moan as you tremble and come in our synchronized surrender. Even the way you say baby as you cuddle me in tightly after the passion has ended. The beating of your heart as my head lays snuggled tightly against your chest. Oh, how these sweet sounds feed my soul.
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Re. Feed my Soul
2nd Apr 2018 6:15am
“Sound of my body as it fuses with yours feeds my soul”. Love it!
Amazing piece!
Amazing piece!
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Much thanks to you. I am just now starting to feel somewhat comfortable with my writing. I need all the imput I can get!
Re. Feed my Soul
2nd Apr 2018 9:18am
Sensuous. Rhyming comment:
Give me the music and the moonlight,
And a body that will hold mine tight.
Give me the music and the moonlight,
And a body that will hold mine tight.
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Re: Re. Feed my Soul
3rd Apr 2018 2:35am
I will take any advice I can get. I do thank you. I honestly have no idea what I'm doing other than putting words together at this point..
Re. Feed my Soul
3rd Apr 2018 6:20pm
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4th Apr 2018 1:35am
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10th Apr 2018 10:36pm
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25th Apr 2018 7:13pm
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Re: Re. Feed my Soul
21st Apr 2019 6:39pm
Thank you, girlie. This was my first piece after a 4 year writer's block!! Along came the muse..sigh
Re. Feed my Soul
12th Sep 2019 11:31pm
Romantic eroticism blazing a trail across my manliness. This is the stuff of my dreams. XoXo Hugs John
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Re: Re. Feed my Soul
12th Sep 2019 11:44pm
I'm glad you liked it, that was my 1st piece to write my 2nd go round. I've also revised it, but need to grab it from the other site & update. Thank you for the comment love & add!
Re. Feed my Soul
13th May 2020 9:01pm
There is no greater music than the rhythm between two souls joining as one as nature intended, Until he rolls over, farts and spends the rest of the night snoring. Mmm, romance at its best.
A very warm and touching piece that could easily be a brief snippet from a larger story.
Love is poetry, weather love or lust matters not. A powerful force far greater than gravity brings beings together rewarded by the gift of each others pleasure, beautifully captured by you.
XXX
A very warm and touching piece that could easily be a brief snippet from a larger story.
Love is poetry, weather love or lust matters not. A powerful force far greater than gravity brings beings together rewarded by the gift of each others pleasure, beautifully captured by you.
XXX
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Re: Re. Feed my Soul
1st Jun 2020 11:18pm
Hey there and welcome to the Deep, or just my page{ I haven't seen you before} This was one of my firsts and poorly written. Surprised but grateful you found an ounce of something. Love the farts reference 👌
Re. Feed my Soul
26th Feb 2024 00:32am