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Fall
I fall so quickly
Into a downward spiral of sweat and harmonious movement.
Fall with me into the darkness of gripping thighs and wonder.
Catch me before I hit rock bottom or release me.
Tied to emotion or only to the bed post?
Is there a difference in free falling and love?
Into a downward spiral of sweat and harmonious movement.
Fall with me into the darkness of gripping thighs and wonder.
Catch me before I hit rock bottom or release me.
Tied to emotion or only to the bed post?
Is there a difference in free falling and love?
Published 1st Apr 2018
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1st Apr 2018 6:34am
beautiful..erotic...self awareness...succinct.....great to see you writing Brandie!
1st Apr 2018 6:35am
Thank you dearest Lawrence! I can always count on you to brighten my comments section 😊
XO
Brandie
XO
Brandie
1st Apr 2018 9:36am
"Tied to you or only to the bedpost?" Asked another way, is all this love for the person addressed to or just opportunistic lust (bed)?
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11th Apr 2018 3:08pm
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17th Apr 2018 8:58am
Thank you Dark!
It is very true, the control or the lack thereof in each situation.. always exhilarating.
XO
Brandie
It is very true, the control or the lack thereof in each situation.. always exhilarating.
XO
Brandie
17th Apr 2018 8:59am
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