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The Hunger Grows
A slight touch on my lips,
dry but soft and warm
as we seek our rhythm,
I grow too eager
and start fumbling.
He slows me,
leading the way.
My mouth melts with his
as I feed on the
craving kiss that I need.
The hunger grows
and we sink deeper.
God, the fire.
I start spinning
round and round,
faster and faster,
breaking into pieces
until I disintegrate.
dry but soft and warm
as we seek our rhythm,
I grow too eager
and start fumbling.
He slows me,
leading the way.
My mouth melts with his
as I feed on the
craving kiss that I need.
The hunger grows
and we sink deeper.
God, the fire.
I start spinning
round and round,
faster and faster,
breaking into pieces
until I disintegrate.
Written by
CharlotteMae
Published 31st Mar 2018
| Edited 31st Jan 2019
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Re. A Melting Kiss
Anonymous
31st Mar 2018 9:40pm
This is an elegant piece of erotic art ....so sensuous and romantic but its dipped in eroticism
Well written!!
Love always Autumn xoxo
Well written!!
Love always Autumn xoxo
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Re. A Melting Kiss
31st Mar 2018 11:27pm
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3rd Apr 2018 1:10am
By paced I mean the meter or cadence of the write, the measure of the words per line reads unhurried, which is pleasing.
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Re. A Melting Kiss
Anonymous
2nd Apr 2018 3:22am
Hey Charlotte........this is a great ink......luv sensual erotic.......outstanding work.......enjoyed......purple luv & hugs xo :)
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Re. The Hunger Grows
20th Apr 2018 11:22am
Oh my dear poetess ... love this one. The short lines, crisp line breaks, rising tension and desire ... "until I disintegrate" ... how clever and perfect an ending
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Re. The Hunger Grows
You writesuperbly Charlotte I have read Wave on Wave to a friend .She like me thinks it the best on this subject she has heard. Kexby
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15th Jun 2018 6:06pm
.....sigh, memories of when love, lust and the erotic was fresh and new. That all consuming fire in the moment. My God. I love the innocence in your words : )
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15th Jun 2018 6:43pm
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- Edited 8th Feb 2019 10:53am
24th Oct 2018 11:43pm
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