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Around The Corner
The wet towel on the floor
your scented body
across the bed
immersed in the phone
I step into the doorway
to ask you a question
the invitation of pink
overwhelms me
and I forget
what I was going to ask.
your scented body
across the bed
immersed in the phone
I step into the doorway
to ask you a question
the invitation of pink
overwhelms me
and I forget
what I was going to ask.
Published 30th Mar 2018
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30th Mar 2018 8:32pm
Could easily visualise the scene. "The invitation of pink overwhelms me". Thought of rhyming summary:
Overwhelmed by her naked bask,
Forgot what I had come to ask.
Overwhelmed by her naked bask,
Forgot what I had come to ask.
6th Apr 2018 00:07am
Absent mind, present erection.
What better way to be distracted?
Cute and well written.
Thanks for sharing
E
What better way to be distracted?
Cute and well written.
Thanks for sharing
E
5th May 2018 1:15pm
