wheat field dream part two

I thoroughly enjoy your style. Lots of imagery and puzzles to work out :)

so glad you enjoyed thank you!

beautiiful imagery
water is like life's river it helps all
to sail forwards

thank you for your comment! :)

beautiful Marielle it hurts me this deep heartache
you're so beautiful you're expression so gorgeous
I hope the one you desire hears your heart
and regrets at the very least the pain he's caused..

love Crim

thank you love, i appreciate you comment.
thankfully I've moved on as this was originally written three years ago

"And I walk the road  
in flowered  
meadows"- ah this is good feeling imagery,warm and fuzzy like eating a peach with a lover under a a tree on a  mild day.

tasting the clouds as they pass by, breaking the last set of shapes,animals,and vehicles named looking up from blankets in the grass

these shadows we walk towards
stalking could be serene,succulent,a source of inspiration embarking on a journey

whispering days like waterfall words off bookshelves

circling dreams as live prey for the hungry hunt
devouring the ache that followed in the days before

so we stare through wet condensating raindrop windowpanes on a warm drink kind of day

the rushing water makes us restless
illegal street racing our memories of imagination and facts up the fictional boulevards
bracing for what comes next

and when the ghost silhouette of ourselves gets tired they sit back down into our cat nap bodies on the recliner
returning from the wheat field of dreams


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wonderful self poem marielle
excellent emotions turned in me.

what your wrote is absolutely gorgeous i loved it,thank you. :)

what your wrote is absolutely gorgeous i loved it,thank you. :)

Hello

found this a joy to read. flow, rhyme, word-choice all work together to create something beautiful. well done

*hat tip*

thank you means a lot coming from a talent like yourself much love