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Cinquain and Me
My heart
is quite strong
but about my mind
that is one learning curve
Godspeed
I try
I loose, I learn
I try again, I count
on hope- my alma matter
I grow!
is quite strong
but about my mind
that is one learning curve
Godspeed
I try
I loose, I learn
I try again, I count
on hope- my alma matter
I grow!
Published 24th Mar 2018
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The author encourages honest critique.
24th Mar 2018 10:16am
well done.
the expression.
no question/sawal re the quality.
in regards to the honoring of honest critique, not a critique just pointing out of couple of spell errors
stanza2 L2, W2- i believe it's 'lose',
also stanza2 penultimate line, last word- i believe it is 'mater'.
once again
welcome to the community!
the expression.
no question/sawal re the quality.
in regards to the honoring of honest critique, not a critique just pointing out of couple of spell errors
stanza2 L2, W2- i believe it's 'lose',
also stanza2 penultimate line, last word- i believe it is 'mater'.
once again
welcome to the community!
24th Mar 2018 5:10pm
