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Windstorms
Nervous energy surrounds.
Enfolds.
Envelops.
Crackles.
Impels.
Inhales.
Draws into, then tosses around.
Compels.
Ignites.
Throws.
Thrashes.
Searches for port in an unknown land.
Pulls.
Pushes.
Slaps about.
Rejuvenates.
Moves north to south, back and forth.
Suffocates.
Pulls in.
Draws out.
Explodes.
Exhales.
Repeats.
Repeats.
Repeats.
New lovers in an old bed.
R.
Enfolds.
Envelops.
Crackles.
Impels.
Inhales.
Draws into, then tosses around.
Compels.
Ignites.
Throws.
Thrashes.
Searches for port in an unknown land.
Pulls.
Pushes.
Slaps about.
Rejuvenates.
Moves north to south, back and forth.
Suffocates.
Pulls in.
Draws out.
Explodes.
Exhales.
Repeats.
Repeats.
Repeats.
New lovers in an old bed.
R.
Published 23rd Mar 2018
Author's Note
Wind gets me, every single time...
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23rd Mar 2018 6:29am
All that tossing about LOL, does put an erotic connotation on the sounds and movement of the winds outside, even before reader reaches the last line.
23rd Mar 2018 4:51pm
23rd Mar 2018 10:17am
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23rd Mar 2018 9:37pm
29th Mar 2018 2:22pm
29th Mar 2018 9:38am
interesting poem :-) i love the words used in this and how you ended it with .. ''New lovers in an old bed ''
29th Mar 2018 2:21pm
Anonymous
19th Apr 2018 2:25pm
Nature is the author of all of it so... perfect sense for a storm to feel erotic. Nicely done. Much enjoyed. :)
21st Apr 2018 1:44pm
Anonymous
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7th Feb 2019 8:14pm
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8th Feb 2019 3:14am
Thank you! And thanks for bringing out such great inspiration in your latest Comp!
8th Feb 2019 3:14am
Thank you! And thanks for bringing out such great inspiration in your latest Comp!
