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Missing
I am missing
No one realized the darkness that fell
Out of sight and out of mind
It's so easy to disappear
You left me in my sadness
You let me drift away
I yearn for someone to miss me
I bleed for passion and intrigue
I am missing
But can you be missing if no one knows you're gone?
No one realized the darkness that fell
Out of sight and out of mind
It's so easy to disappear
You left me in my sadness
You let me drift away
I yearn for someone to miss me
I bleed for passion and intrigue
I am missing
But can you be missing if no one knows you're gone?
Published 18th Mar 2018
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18th Mar 2018 6:37pm
24th Mar 2018 4:45am
Thank you Lawrence, I always appreciate your kind words and support!
XO
Brandie
XO
Brandie
18th Mar 2018 9:32pm
When something is missing inside, we are missing from purselves...
Nice write Brandie!
JJ
Nice write Brandie!
JJ
24th Mar 2018 4:46am
21st Mar 2018 6:18pm
24th Mar 2018 4:48am
Thank you John, I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment!
XO
Brandie
XO
Brandie
1st Apr 2018 4:28am
What a beautiful poem. Each couplet just builds upon the sadness of it, in a wonderful way.
Great write!
Great write!
1st Apr 2018 6:40am
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1st Apr 2018 9:41pm
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2nd Apr 2018 3:57am
26th Feb 2022 3:17pm
You would be missed by the DUP community, as you write well, and from the other comments well liked.
Your poem describes the dilemma - the need to be needed but the instinct to withdraw. to isolate. Your words made me feel your anxiety, frustration and fear. Hug Brandie.
Your poem describes the dilemma - the need to be needed but the instinct to withdraw. to isolate. Your words made me feel your anxiety, frustration and fear. Hug Brandie.
