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Moon-gazing (visual)
Published 16th Mar 2018
| Edited 21st Mar 2018
Author's Note
Here are short poems referring to the time-honored tradition of moon-viewing, as a pink moon rises for the new Spring.
3: Bats are insectivores.
3: Bats are insectivores.
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Anonymous
16th Mar 2018 11:20am
Iridescent brilliance here. The moon is an enchanting mistress. Truly hope the Moon landing was a red flag - what has the moon done so heinous to be stained by our civilisation.
16th Mar 2018 11:24am
Thank you so much. A lovely reception you've given me through your words and the honor of placing my set in your RL.
16th Mar 2018 11:37am
beautiful. just beautiful
is the view
that you generate/facilitate through your work Jade! ever an artist.
job.
expression.
amazing.
is the view
that you generate/facilitate through your work Jade! ever an artist.
job.
expression.
amazing.
16th Mar 2018 12:20pm
16th Mar 2018 2:20pm
the jacaranda sport their feathers...
in the pink moon of spring.
As we gaze, same round eye of night gazes us as well,
binding us together in its light
silver/pink
naked in the glow
'til the the rising of the sun.
tom
in the pink moon of spring.
As we gaze, same round eye of night gazes us as well,
binding us together in its light
silver/pink
naked in the glow
'til the the rising of the sun.
tom
17th Mar 2018 4:07pm
I like the way you can appreciate heavenly bodies, tomcat...
RL appreciate & thanks🐯
RL appreciate & thanks🐯
16th Mar 2018 7:48pm
Excellent descriptions of the moon. Our dear Luna shines bright for us even in the darkest of nights.
Well done!
Well done!
17th Mar 2018 4:10pm
17th Mar 2018 4:34pm
yeah...the jacaranda line and paragraph and eyebrows anointed with diamonds - great lines!!
Why thank you kindly, poet, for sharing your support & appreciation with me.🌛
18th Mar 2018 10:05pm
Beautiful work, particularly that last line. This is gorgeously worded with a wonderful layout. Even the bat stanza has luster to it. You gaze at the moon, and all around becomes magic. Must be the diamonds in your eyebrows, sweet Jade.
20th Mar 2018 5:12pm
Ah my dear friend, the way you express your embrace of my set is so heartwarming. Thank you for the lovely express, and I hope you’ve been sailing safely through the Pineapple Express of storms lately. I hope we have the chance to talk soon.🌛
