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dear woe is me shock-jock
every little
outrageous statement
provocation
of yours
will surely
deliver on
successful attention
but behind the outrage
outright hatred
and sacrilegious rants
lies
one can easily see
your plea
for help
for redemption
dear shock jock
worry not
there is enough
love
and care
left still
in humanity
you
will be remembered
fondly or not
by many
much much more
than you think!
so relax!
Published 15th Mar 2018
Author's Note
see beyond the hatred
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15th Mar 2018 6:52am
15th Mar 2018 7:09am
welcome
to the Community Jonathan!
appreciate your visit
and review
immensely!
to the Community Jonathan!
appreciate your visit
and review
immensely!
Freedom of speech,
quantity of words,
coming from
that end of a horse,
neigh, I say,
holds reins
on quality of message.
The poet's prance
upon his hate,
a welcomed dance
right from the gate.
quantity of words,
coming from
that end of a horse,
neigh, I say,
holds reins
on quality of message.
The poet's prance
upon his hate,
a welcomed dance
right from the gate.
Well... speechless
is the reaction here
at the wisdom of the peer!
yes,
freedom of speech
does not mean
freedom to abuse
freedom to accuse
freedom to slander
just because one can
doesn't mean one should
and again
the plea for help
is unmissable
behind the desperation
humanity
is
was
and always
will be above
h a t e!
just an expression
of my views
on the views
of someone
who needs help!
some serious help!
welcome
is the peer affectionate!
welcome
is the wisdom!
appreciation
from heart
beyond words!
is the reaction here
at the wisdom of the peer!
yes,
freedom of speech
does not mean
freedom to abuse
freedom to accuse
freedom to slander
just because one can
doesn't mean one should
and again
the plea for help
is unmissable
behind the desperation
humanity
is
was
and always
will be above
h a t e!
just an expression
of my views
on the views
of someone
who needs help!
some serious help!
welcome
is the peer affectionate!
welcome
is the wisdom!
appreciation
from heart
beyond words!
16th Mar 2018 7:32pm
such rate of disappearance.such transcience as the title holds...still how often the seen redhot sparks like lowly sensationalism, these shock volts. u say n makes one realize much more. ..the truth stands out vivid n enlarged as you say what you say.. finely written n heartfelt
23rd Mar 2018 2:36pm
welcome
is the peer unmatched
in her generosity
welcome
is the Friend
unmatched in her kindness and wisdom.
it is but a sad reality these days..anywhere and everywhere you turn, the desperation and the business of hatred..so easy to overlook the good right in front and all around even for the producers of the embers!!
deep
the appreciation
for the visit
the honor!
is the peer unmatched
in her generosity
welcome
is the Friend
unmatched in her kindness and wisdom.
it is but a sad reality these days..anywhere and everywhere you turn, the desperation and the business of hatred..so easy to overlook the good right in front and all around even for the producers of the embers!!
deep
the appreciation
for the visit
the honor!
17th Mar 2018 7:47pm
Love this piece, it's so true, such a great flow to the piece. Talented write as usual, cold.
~anonshadow
~anonshadow
23rd Mar 2018 2:37pm
welcome
is the poet, the friend, the peer admired!
it is but an honor
to be the recipient of such a kind review!!
deep
is the appreciation.
is the poet, the friend, the peer admired!
it is but an honor
to be the recipient of such a kind review!!
deep
is the appreciation.
