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The kind breeze
Welcome breeze plays quietly outside
Moving gently and softly like a wing
Feeling so soft like a touch of peach
We are safe and allow her to touch our cheeks
The beautiful orange and red leaves on trees love her kindness
In the spring time the breeze comforts the transformed catterpilars
It is soft and never wild creating a magical comfort
It helps the birds that sweep delightfully through our sky
When darkness fills our heart and hearts lose sparkle, the breeze is there
When we desire a piece of calm gentle movement is there
When joy isn't present the breeze circles the red roses
When rain makes a shadow the subtle softness is free to take our hand
Moving gently and softly like a wing
Feeling so soft like a touch of peach
We are safe and allow her to touch our cheeks
The beautiful orange and red leaves on trees love her kindness
In the spring time the breeze comforts the transformed catterpilars
It is soft and never wild creating a magical comfort
It helps the birds that sweep delightfully through our sky
When darkness fills our heart and hearts lose sparkle, the breeze is there
When we desire a piece of calm gentle movement is there
When joy isn't present the breeze circles the red roses
When rain makes a shadow the subtle softness is free to take our hand
Published 12th Mar 2018
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17th Mar 2018 3:00pm
This piece is filled with thought capturing moments and feelings that so many people overlook in life... enjoyed
20th Mar 2018 4:56pm
Wow, you have created a lot of beautiful imagery about breeze, like you have really seen it and touched it. I love every line and every word. I feel so calm and comfortable with the kind breeze.
much love
RoseJasmine
much love
RoseJasmine
25th Mar 2018 6:21pm
I like the peaceful and positive themes of your poem. It's a breath of fresh air from the countless dark poems and the negative real-life events going on world-wide.
Well done!
Well done!
25th Mar 2018 6:31pm
18th Jul 2018 1:38am
It is like trying to find a bridge... Has anybody seen the bridge?.
It is the will of the breeze spanning this poem. .
It is the will of the breeze spanning this poem. .
