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New start
Your smile shines
a beam of hope
into my black-hole heart
Illuminating
with sparkling eyes
the road to my new start
a beam of hope
into my black-hole heart
Illuminating
with sparkling eyes
the road to my new start
Published 8th Mar 2018
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8th Mar 2018 1:37am
A short, but beautiful way to portray the hopefulness and completeness love can bring. It can really bring light to the darkest of nights.
Well done!
Well done!
8th Mar 2018 3:14pm
Thank you!! It's kind of amazing to feel hope after being stuck for so long. I'm glad you like it :)
9th Apr 2018 00:42am
Short but powerful piece. I love the use of light when it comes expressing love.
“Illuminating with sparkling eyes...”
Love that! Well done!
“Illuminating with sparkling eyes...”
Love that! Well done!
10th Apr 2018 00:32am
