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He Is Mine – A Cinquain Poem
The guy
Who brought me sun
Brighter than the sparkling
Ocean waves that were once my home
Is mine.
Who brought me sun
Brighter than the sparkling
Ocean waves that were once my home
Is mine.
Published 7th Mar 2018
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Submitted to Write a cinquain poem competition.
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7th Mar 2018 8:09pm
This is a romantic piece. "The guy who brought me Sun" I like that. Brava!
7th Mar 2018 8:26pm
8th Mar 2018 1:38pm
There is something so calming and peaceful about this, Elena. The fruition of a dream. It's lovely and resonates deeply.
8th Mar 2018 4:31pm
