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TYBURN FAIL
Racoon
Baboon
Buffoon
Cartoon
With eyes of racoon, hair of baboon
Star buffoon in our nation’s cartoon
Baboon
Buffoon
Cartoon
With eyes of racoon, hair of baboon
Star buffoon in our nation’s cartoon
Published 5th Mar 2018
Author's Note
So I tried composing a Tyburn style poem only to find that I had incorrectly structured the poem. I still like the poem, hence the title.
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6th Mar 2018 2:25am
6th Mar 2018 3:01am
Thank you Teri! I' m embarrassed to even look at him or hear him speak.
6th Mar 2018 2:42pm
6th Mar 2018 5:05am
Even thought I don't know the politician(maybe it's him?) and "Tyburn" is a strnage word to me, but I enjoy this simplicity and sarcasm. I feel the imagery about the person trought the four characters in this short piece is quite distinctive and intriguing.
much love
RoseJasmine
much love
RoseJasmine
6th Mar 2018 5:11am
Rosejasmine, it was a parody of Trump. Tyburn is a poetry style that was highlighted in one os our competitions. Thank you so much for your comment.
6th Mar 2018 5:17am
6th Mar 2018 5:24am
Anonymous
12th Mar 2018 1:47am
heh heh..you call it a fail
i say you nailed it!!!
structure don't need to be perfect
as long as the message is on point..
i say you nailed it!!!
structure don't need to be perfect
as long as the message is on point..
12th Mar 2018 2:14am
Thank you Naajir! I originally took it down but then I couldn't resist. Although the hair does actually resemble more the Orangutans :D
