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where the red buzzard flies
ejaculate madness
let it spray its depravity
in the face of societies restrictions
smear feces on the walls of people's minds
awaken them with a stench so great
they at last taste the vomit they've been spewing
from mouths of ignorance
so vast is this wasteland they've constructed
with words hollow in nature
leaving solid landmarks
to lead astray the sheep
who travel by night
they are off to see the Wizard
begging they be granted some brains
brainwashed they tumble off cliffs
because there is no yellow brick road
to enlightenment and freedom
just more dead end ideas
wrapped in a big red bow
concealing the maggoty entrails of corruption
climbing the highest levels
through dewy eyes
we look to these mafioso type hooligans to save us
save yourself
don't blindly go into that dark night
the hit-man wears polyester leisure suits
he's your drinking buddy
you'll be dead where you sit
on your ass of complacency
secure in the knowledge
the type of car you drive will save you
let artificial intelligence
drive your cars and protect your homes
while you fall deeper into the spell your under
wake up the universe is watching
you've died to materialism
rotting they're coming to bury you
who will come to mourn your grave?
when you went to war
just to turn and run
back to what you thought was safe
Published 3rd Mar 2018
| Edited 6th Dec 2018
Author's Note
read by the ever talented Sinisterspital thank you i'm honored by your reading of my poem..
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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3rd Mar 2018 1:28pm
3rd Mar 2018 2:56pm
3rd Mar 2018 4:03pm
3rd Mar 2018 4:12pm
giggles thank you Lawrence
yes this write is darkly intense agreed..
a bit heavy for early morning reading lol :)
love Brenda
yes this write is darkly intense agreed..
a bit heavy for early morning reading lol :)
love Brenda
Anonymous
3rd Mar 2018 5:03pm
The blindness seems to be so deliberate and compulsive these days. Automatons trundling through their tick tock days with little or no emotional or intellectual engagement. I love the dark, bleak arrow of this one - pointing out the danger...if they can wake up and see it. Another gem, my beautiful Dark Angel. I love you :-)
...ever your Willow
...ever your Willow
3rd Mar 2018 5:11pm
thank you beautiful Willow i'm not sure where this came from this morning or why but come it did..
I love your take on it.. you always bring me added insight to what I write..
I love you..
love Brenda
I love your take on it.. you always bring me added insight to what I write..
I love you..
love Brenda
Anonymous
3rd Mar 2018 7:04pm
i can dig it and honored to read it for you for here and with permission my show next Sat. I dont write a lot of political but y latest well I'll just have to show you.
3rd Mar 2018 7:07pm
thank you graciously dearest Sinister One i'm so excited for you to read this one.. yes I would be honored for you to do it on your show.. I can't wait to see :)
love Crim
love Crim
Anonymous
3rd Mar 2018 7:15pm
i wrote the one i just posted "shy human kind" at 2am yesterday..yes linked aye.
3rd Mar 2018 7:24pm
3rd Mar 2018 9:23pm
Fine work Crim. My favorite lines:
the hit-man wears polyester leisure suits
he's your drinking buddy
you'll be dead where you sit
on your ass of complacency
secure in the knowledge
the type of car you drive will save you
The buzzards circle over the heads of those with BMWs or better. No respect at all.
the hit-man wears polyester leisure suits
he's your drinking buddy
you'll be dead where you sit
on your ass of complacency
secure in the knowledge
the type of car you drive will save you
The buzzards circle over the heads of those with BMWs or better. No respect at all.
3rd Mar 2018 11:38pm
thank you dearest Sir Crow indeed they do.. rot does all flesh be it rich or poor..
appreciate your visit..
love Crim
appreciate your visit..
love Crim
4th Mar 2018 00:16am
I really enjoyed this! Made me think of everyone walking around staring at their phones. A bunch of lifeless, mindless followers of society. Nobody lives anymore; they all just try to fit into whatever is trending at the moment.
4th Mar 2018 1:26am
thank you graciously dearest Vinnie for seeing deep into this write you have a strong mind from my view..
love Crimsin
love Crimsin
Anonymous
4th Mar 2018 7:10pm
Absolutely loved this completely!! Amazing job from start to finish!!
9th Mar 2018 5:06pm
5th Mar 2018 12:49pm
"ejaculate madness "....you have my attention,go on...lol
"smear feces on the walls of people's minds
awaken them with a stench so great
they at last taste the vomit they've been spewing
from mouths of ignorance " - and at this point i'm sure i've chosen the best poem to start my day of at 7:18 am with.
constructing wastelands
i've never said no to the yello brick road and i'm not goign to start now.
take me back to Oz
https://www.landofoznc.com/history
i've always liked the word "hooligans", it makes me think of this 1979 gang move called the wanders where they had a giant 3-4 gang fist fight in a soccer field
good fashion lines you broke out
"secure in the knowledge
the type of car you drive will save you " -i'm currently driving a 1997 gold mercury voyager dad van....i am so fucked lol.
"let artificial intelligence
drive your cars and protect your homes
while you fall deeper into the spell your under "- in Florida Ford is already testing out self driving ford fusions i believe with Dominos to deliver pizzas....my god they're going to take over the world.
"wake up the universe is watching
you've died to materialism
rotting they're coming to bury you"- this is too true and makes me sad sometimes to be an American. ignorance is bliss.
Syria, Afghanistan, this world is a time bomb waiting to go off.what the hell happened to the tower of babel and people working together for a good cause.
it's so hard to judge what actually makes a difference anymore; sending money,actually joining the fight,humanitarian aid. sometimes this world makes me feel lost when i try to take it all in at once.like too much oxygen.
"who will come to mourn your grave?" - who indeed i wonder,i've just become a shut in recluse who works too much and keeps a call center job because it lets me be a part time poet in between calls.
as long as i'm questioning things i'm ok i think.
the old "i think therefore i am" deal.
"we cannot doubt of our existence while we doubt" - René Descartes
great dark thought provoking piece Crim.
the title is very fetching as well.
i wish you a productive day of writing,and may your pen never cease to flow.
"smear feces on the walls of people's minds
awaken them with a stench so great
they at last taste the vomit they've been spewing
from mouths of ignorance " - and at this point i'm sure i've chosen the best poem to start my day of at 7:18 am with.
constructing wastelands
i've never said no to the yello brick road and i'm not goign to start now.
take me back to Oz
https://www.landofoznc.com/history
i've always liked the word "hooligans", it makes me think of this 1979 gang move called the wanders where they had a giant 3-4 gang fist fight in a soccer field
good fashion lines you broke out
"secure in the knowledge
the type of car you drive will save you " -i'm currently driving a 1997 gold mercury voyager dad van....i am so fucked lol.
"let artificial intelligence
drive your cars and protect your homes
while you fall deeper into the spell your under "- in Florida Ford is already testing out self driving ford fusions i believe with Dominos to deliver pizzas....my god they're going to take over the world.
"wake up the universe is watching
you've died to materialism
rotting they're coming to bury you"- this is too true and makes me sad sometimes to be an American. ignorance is bliss.
Syria, Afghanistan, this world is a time bomb waiting to go off.what the hell happened to the tower of babel and people working together for a good cause.
it's so hard to judge what actually makes a difference anymore; sending money,actually joining the fight,humanitarian aid. sometimes this world makes me feel lost when i try to take it all in at once.like too much oxygen.
"who will come to mourn your grave?" - who indeed i wonder,i've just become a shut in recluse who works too much and keeps a call center job because it lets me be a part time poet in between calls.
as long as i'm questioning things i'm ok i think.
the old "i think therefore i am" deal.
"we cannot doubt of our existence while we doubt" - René Descartes
great dark thought provoking piece Crim.
the title is very fetching as well.
i wish you a productive day of writing,and may your pen never cease to flow.
9th Mar 2018 5:09pm
dearest Samael your interpretation of this write moved my heart deeply I love it when one of my writes moves you to do one of your spectacular critiques.. mere words are never enough to say how much I adore you and your genius..
love Crim
love Crim
8th Mar 2018 3:36am
9th Mar 2018 5:09pm
Anonymous
9th Mar 2018 5:32pm
goddammit!!! this should be the new anthem
as we un-pledge allegiance to the matrix!!
"smear feces on the walls of people's minds
awaken them with a stench so great
they at last taste the vomit they've been spewing
from mouths of ignorance"
yes yes and yessss!!!
passionate write
passionate read!!!
as we un-pledge allegiance to the matrix!!
"smear feces on the walls of people's minds
awaken them with a stench so great
they at last taste the vomit they've been spewing
from mouths of ignorance"
yes yes and yessss!!!
passionate write
passionate read!!!
9th Mar 2018 5:44pm
aw thank you dearest Naajir I love your enthusiasm you so get this write and I love it!!!
love Crim
love Crim
10th Mar 2018 11:57pm
save yourself (Amen!) - the man wants your soul :-(((
Inspiring write and I loved the performance :-))) Huge warm Hugs :-))))))
Inspiring write and I loved the performance :-))) Huge warm Hugs :-))))))
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