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Untitled feelings the oscillations of perfectly woven moments
My sister's birthday
50 is a
Big day
Milestone
I message with
Tact
Spice with humor
As I am texting my
Recent
Write about
Living and
Dying
Her beloved cat
Of many years
Finally passes on
She's a
Wreck
I comfort
As best
I can
Reading
Googling
Wash my best
Duds
Preparing
A final breath of
Winter
Descends
The night air is
Fresh
Cool
So inviting
As is the
Bright
Blue
White
Face of the
Moon
Tilt my chin
Drink her
In
Pay my respects
Time passes
One wash
Finishes
Begin another
Time is money
Pay my
Dues
A friend who recently
Lost
A beloved cat
Has a day at work
We share
She feels
Surreal
Something is about to happen
She returns home and finds
A new little
Feline
Blessing
I feel
The glow of her
New found
Joy
I smile
Turn my head from side to
Side
Cannot help but say
Livings and
Dyings
A friend who
Fled
An abusive
Home
Living now
In a car
Having begun a new
Job
Saving up
Everyday on her
Break
I tell her,
Good girl
Stay focused
I'm proud of you
Now
One more
Paycheck
New place
Lined up
Moving through these
Transitional phases can be
Difficult
Things get
Shook up
Feelings get
Shook loose
Time slides
In the saddle of
Tides which
Sway like
Hips
Sultry
Motions
So
Seductive
We focus in
And forget
Everything
Else
Everything
But the blue white
Face
Of the moon
I tilt back my
Chin
Eyes
Drink her
In
50 is a
Big day
Milestone
I message with
Tact
Spice with humor
As I am texting my
Recent
Write about
Living and
Dying
Her beloved cat
Of many years
Finally passes on
She's a
Wreck
I comfort
As best
I can
Reading
Googling
Wash my best
Duds
Preparing
A final breath of
Winter
Descends
The night air is
Fresh
Cool
So inviting
As is the
Bright
Blue
White
Face of the
Moon
Tilt my chin
Drink her
In
Pay my respects
Time passes
One wash
Finishes
Begin another
Time is money
Pay my
Dues
A friend who recently
Lost
A beloved cat
Has a day at work
We share
She feels
Surreal
Something is about to happen
She returns home and finds
A new little
Feline
Blessing
I feel
The glow of her
New found
Joy
I smile
Turn my head from side to
Side
Cannot help but say
Livings and
Dyings
A friend who
Fled
An abusive
Home
Living now
In a car
Having begun a new
Job
Saving up
Everyday on her
Break
I tell her,
Good girl
Stay focused
I'm proud of you
Now
One more
Paycheck
New place
Lined up
Moving through these
Transitional phases can be
Difficult
Things get
Shook up
Feelings get
Shook loose
Time slides
In the saddle of
Tides which
Sway like
Hips
Sultry
Motions
So
Seductive
We focus in
And forget
Everything
Else
Everything
But the blue white
Face
Of the moon
I tilt back my
Chin
Eyes
Drink her
In
Published 3rd Mar 2018
| Edited 21st Apr 2019
Author's Note
I feel alright. How bout you?
Copyright © 2018 by Daniel Christensen
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3rd Mar 2018 3:56am
3rd Mar 2018 3:59am
Anonymous
3rd Mar 2018 4:24am
Beautiful vignettes kissed by a loving moon. Much enjoyed. :-)
...Willow
...Willow
3rd Mar 2018 4:27am
Thank you Willow. Spit balling writes lately without concern for inspiration, just whatever I'm doing or thinking, to have more presence for friends here.
Anonymous
3rd Mar 2018 4:32am
Sometimes ungoverned pen creates the most intriguing ink. :-)
3rd Mar 2018 4:48am
I always just spill onto the page but I wait until inspiration comes over me like a seizure usually. Changing things up lately, as many things are changing.
My editing consists of changing word doubling and mostly reducing, even though the volume of my writes is often groaned about. I just shake my head. You can read a 300 page book, watch a 90 minute movie, but you can't read a 12 page poem? lol If you like the content, I don't see why it being long should be such an issue, but people need something to complain about to have presence I guess :P and really I prefer it to reams of saccharin praise.
I write because I have to, like breathing and all I look for in response is to make a connection.
It's really cool to talk with you about the art.
My editing consists of changing word doubling and mostly reducing, even though the volume of my writes is often groaned about. I just shake my head. You can read a 300 page book, watch a 90 minute movie, but you can't read a 12 page poem? lol If you like the content, I don't see why it being long should be such an issue, but people need something to complain about to have presence I guess :P and really I prefer it to reams of saccharin praise.
I write because I have to, like breathing and all I look for in response is to make a connection.
It's really cool to talk with you about the art.
3rd Mar 2018 9:37am
Time flies
inhale exhale inhale
the years are gone
but the moon stays forever
...such beauty, David, caught in words.:)
inhale exhale inhale
the years are gone
but the moon stays forever
...such beauty, David, caught in words.:)
3rd Mar 2018 6:01pm
