In The Not-So-Still Of The Night

Excellently done my dear! Good luck to you too! <3

Thank you, AtoMik. If it were not for your poem,
this one would not have been written. It was a
fun write.

Teri

Well,
some tickling and tingling
read.
That guy Tom, that bar-stud
he needs to be taught a lesson

good luck with the comp dear T!!

Well, not sure if he learned anything,
but when the subject matter keeps
your attention, the class is more
interesting. :-)

Always enjoy your visits C_f

Unique, I like it!

Thank you, Seed.

And welcome to the Deep Under.............

AT

Thanks! I am looking forward to reading many good poems here and being inspired.

I loved this seems like a really enjoyable poetry format :-)

excellent as always :-))))))))))

I believe you're right, though it was fun, it took several attempts to get the wording right without losing the intent.

Thank you, David

Very unique and well written ! Loved this!

Thank you, Faith. I had fun constructing it.

There is a set format with rules. You can google Tyburn Poem, for more info on correct format.

Try a few, they can make you think, if you follow all the requirements.

I'm always happy when you park a comment.

Teri

You're such a joy to read and the pleasure is mine. I learned something new from you as I was not aware of this type of poem. I love experimenting and playing with words. Write on beautiful soul!

Thank you for the compliment. However the credit for learning of the poem format must go to AtoMikbomb and Sugglebuck, for I had not read hers, then the comp. entries, my poem would be nonexistent, though I do appreciate the thought.

*gasps, blushes, fans*

Lights, curtain, fans.......applause. :-)))

Oh what fun with this one ... love the structure with the bulging last lines near at the end giving build and flow

Thank you LDF, it was a fun little write.

Not sure if Lee was "bulging" also or not, however there was definitely "build and flow near the end" though. :-)))

Shame on me, but I love double entendres.

Thanks for stopping by, it's appreciated.

You're welcome ... don't apologize for the double entendres ... I relish them as well

you false damsel you...a voyeur's dream no doubt. a fun and tantalizing write!

Exactly what I was going for, well in the poem, a fun little poem
stroking the...errrrrrr.........ahhhhh..........imagination.  :-)

Glad you found it so also.

Thanks so much for parking a comment on this.

I love the quick build then the snap of flip. I love the joy I've found here tonight reminding me the fun of the write. Much love and mad respect,
me

The one thing guaranteed on DU is the joy of finding poems in the genre suiting your current mood. The ebb and flow, and balance within living we all need to feed our yin and yang.

Glad I was able to be at the right time and place, my friend.