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1,2,3,4

One.
      I promised we’d be fine
Two.
      Even after the fight.
Three.
      But I still don’t understand.
Four.
      I’m kind of mad at you.
Five.
      A little on the hurtside too.
Six.
      You swear you love me…
Seven.
      She believed it too… didn’t she?
Eight.
      You were everything I ever wanted.
Nine.
      But now by your memory… I am haunted.
Ten.
      You never gave us a chance.
Ten.
      All this time I’ve been stuck in a trance
Ten.
      All I wanted was you
Ten.
      Sadly, that was the one thing you didn’t offer me.
One.
      I’m just another face in the crowd.
Two.
      My scared eyes pinned to the ground.
Three.
      Something brushes my shoulder.
Four.
      Quick to apologize…
Five.
      We lock eyes.
Six.
      His forgiving smile catches mine
Seven.
      Maybe… I’ll be fine.
Eight.
      It might be too late for you and I
Nine.
      This is me telling you goodbye.
Ten.
      And finally getting to say hello again.
Written by LightWithin256
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Author's Note
I'm not sure how I feel about this poem. I just love the idea of numbered poems and I guess I wanted to try one!
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