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Speak To Me
Speak to me my desire
where your hillsides come alive
wrap your legs around the beauty
riding long where blueberry thrive
drift down within starlight's fire
flushed against an alabaster sky
rage, rage
bed these trepidations
rupturing through valiant vapors
once thought dormant
now alive
speak to me my desire
where words come to unwind
in the secluded and mysterious
recesses of my mind
where your hillsides come alive
wrap your legs around the beauty
riding long where blueberry thrive
drift down within starlight's fire
flushed against an alabaster sky
rage, rage
bed these trepidations
rupturing through valiant vapors
once thought dormant
now alive
speak to me my desire
where words come to unwind
in the secluded and mysterious
recesses of my mind
Published 12th Feb 2018
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Anonymous
13th Feb 2018 1:11pm
So much passion and longing in these words. I love the way that last stanza settles into the soul. Beautiful, Tim
...Willow
...Willow
13th Feb 2018 1:58pm
Always allow your desire to speak to you Tim. I believe it's beautiful to have it around. Love the wording. The first stanza is especially amazing.
The borrowed natural scenery is used brilliantly:
"wrap your legs around the beauty "
"drift down within starlight's fire
flushed against an alabaster sky"
Such a dreamy work makes me smile.
much love
RoseJasamine
The borrowed natural scenery is used brilliantly:
"wrap your legs around the beauty "
"drift down within starlight's fire
flushed against an alabaster sky"
Such a dreamy work makes me smile.
much love
RoseJasamine
14th Feb 2018 1:07pm
15th Feb 2018 3:55pm
I really really liked this. I am kind of at a loss for words. haha. Great write. ;)
15th Feb 2018 5:28pm
15th Feb 2018 6:50pm
