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Even when
Even when you hurt my feelings,
Even when you put out my light,
Even after all my failings
I promise I stand by your side.
Even when you hurt my soul
Even when I can’t think sane
Even when I now live without goal
I promise I will protect you from pain
Even when I know I hurt you
Even when I know it’s true
Even when I’m feeling blue
I want to be a good friend to you…
Even when you put out my light,
Even after all my failings
I promise I stand by your side.
Even when you hurt my soul
Even when I can’t think sane
Even when I now live without goal
I promise I will protect you from pain
Even when I know I hurt you
Even when I know it’s true
Even when I’m feeling blue
I want to be a good friend to you…
Published 18th Dec 2009
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18th Dec 2009 3:09pm
nicely written poem with its own rhythm. liked your use of:
even
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in each paragraph. enjoyed it, especially the flow of the rhythm
even
even
even
I
in each paragraph. enjoyed it, especially the flow of the rhythm
9th Nov 2012 00:33am
