deepundergroundpoetry.com
Fade
Light drips from a candle
I try to stay within the lines
red spills off of the edges
burning
all I had to say
no erasing
permanent lacerations
until my time begins to fade
I try to stay within the lines
red spills off of the edges
burning
all I had to say
no erasing
permanent lacerations
until my time begins to fade
Published 10th Feb 2018
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
likes 4
reading list entries 0
comments 5
reads 590
Commenting Preference:
The author is looking for friendly feedback.
Anonymous
10th Feb 2018 9:44pm
That is some agonizing imagery, my friend. I have lots of hugs if you need any
...Willow
...Willow
10th Feb 2018 11:14pm
10th Feb 2018 10:48pm
10th Feb 2018 11:15pm
29th Mar 2018 12:43pm
That's a very beautiful poem. Though, I wish you would have ended it with a positive note. We all love poems that are positive. The title is fine.
