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[SOLD OUT]

366 days of dating
daily wins, daily losses
postpone as noun, delays…
all in excess
excess in love, in drinking
fucking in excess (not that we both wanted it)
…it is me the excessive one
with emotions in excess
the pretentious snob
my demands in excess
excess in hopes, and purple haze in excess
empuzzlement in excess
volatility
dreamful plans
and change in plans
in an out in excess
learned the words
    left
        out,
            excluded…

delimiting in excess
cutting the map in pieces
defining you, me…
so many pieces don’t stitch up
we… until
it’s all [SOLD OUT]
[SOLD OUT] on 2nd chances
on make ups & comebacks
[SOLD OUT] on the exciment
we used to had for each other
[SOLD OUT] on us
all of my words [SOLD OUT]
that could have reached you…

glad you have a ticket for yourself

P.S. I’m not coming
Written by debug
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Author's Note
breaking up with Veronica... on the same date we met for a first time a year ago
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