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MORNING SHOWER
Slightly shuddering
as the first cold burst
collides with her skin
consequent goose bumps
soon disappear
washed away
by the now warm water
Enlivened she is
by the soothing stream
she sweetly hums
a Puccini aria
as the crystal drops
cascade as if racing
to lovingly saturate
her every curve
A botanical scent
permeates the steamy air
as she lathers
her lustrous hair
appearing as golden straw
in the midst
of billowing white clouds
suds fall onto white shoulders
only to plummet off
the slopes of glistening breasts
She hides her sapphire hued eyes
vigorously scrubbing her face
removing all traces
of yesterday’s makeup
with the soap coated cloth she lingers
massaging her voluptuous globes
pondering last night’s pleasure
she playfully pinches each nipple
Tenderly she rubs
between her thighs
washing away all vestiges
of her lover’s passion
she bends to scrub her legs
water rolls down her back
flowing into the slightly
parted crevice of her buttocks
pooling in her pucker
before diving to the shower floor
in a splash
as the first cold burst
collides with her skin
consequent goose bumps
soon disappear
washed away
by the now warm water
Enlivened she is
by the soothing stream
she sweetly hums
a Puccini aria
as the crystal drops
cascade as if racing
to lovingly saturate
her every curve
A botanical scent
permeates the steamy air
as she lathers
her lustrous hair
appearing as golden straw
in the midst
of billowing white clouds
suds fall onto white shoulders
only to plummet off
the slopes of glistening breasts
She hides her sapphire hued eyes
vigorously scrubbing her face
removing all traces
of yesterday’s makeup
with the soap coated cloth she lingers
massaging her voluptuous globes
pondering last night’s pleasure
she playfully pinches each nipple
Tenderly she rubs
between her thighs
washing away all vestiges
of her lover’s passion
she bends to scrub her legs
water rolls down her back
flowing into the slightly
parted crevice of her buttocks
pooling in her pucker
before diving to the shower floor
in a splash
Published 9th Feb 2018
| Edited 30th May 2019
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9th Feb 2018 9:40pm
You've made a normal routine so sensual and much more exciting than it usually is.
Very nice, as usual.
Very nice, as usual.
9th Feb 2018 9:53pm
Kinda wrote it from a water drop perspective...a sensual travel log. Thank you so much Luna. I understand, I'm usually so rushed I don't have the time to enjoy the experience. As always,I am thrilled with your comment.
9th Feb 2018 10:44pm
9th Feb 2018 10:45pm
13th Feb 2018 6:47am
Scene that delicately shows a man "what he's missing" and what she may be thinking if he doesn't join in the "morning after" shower.
13th Feb 2018 6:53am
Anonymous
10th Feb 2018 1:28am
I think you wrote this very well and from a unique perspective.
A very creative composition.
A very creative composition.
13th Feb 2018 6:56am
Thank you so much Ani. I wrote it as a celebration if the female form. I am always thrilled to read your comments.
Anonymous
- Edited 11th May 2018 11:47am
10th Feb 2018 9:06pm
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10th Feb 2018 9:57pm
Thank you Tim! Luna's comment put it into perspective from a woman's point of view. It was awfully fun to speculate.
Anonymous
10th Jul 2019 4:19pm
The morning after sounds just as enjoyable as the night before. Great write, Gahddess.
