Swim

swimming upstream through your verbal cascade was a refreshing exercise...you continue to surprise me with your perceptive inquiries into life, the universe and everything...keep at it H

Thank you so much Lawrence ... :)
You brighten me with those lovely words!
I am so grateful... very much indeed
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H

Really enjoyed your use of metaphors to
capture the attention of the reader to
what each person should strive to
accomplish, the reaching out to connect
with others who are different from  
ourselves, to feel and understand their
perspectives better.

Great piece, SM, and as such, into my RL it goes.

AT

Thank you so very much dear AT..! :)
I greatly appreciate  those words
in understanding my piece...

Very, very grateful I am
Love<3<33
H

We do affect one another and we in our own trials are affected in ways we don't even fully know. Excellent write H

Yes, indeed we do.
Many, many ways and aspects that affects
our views, then actions
then those having an effect
good and bad..


if we turn to understand, things would become better
than it could've turned out


I am grateful for your visit!!
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H

My Lil verbal genius is at it again I see!
A depth, a wisdom truly from somethin
beyond the heavens...

your words are such an honor...
Thank you so much for your lovely
continued support... :)

I don't know if deserve such... so very sweet dear Poetic..

lots of love<3
truly,
H

Beautiful piece, nicely done as always!

I always love your visits..
Thank you so very much dear tyler...:)

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H

Such wisdom H.
Love it <3

Oh I do not possess such lol
thank you though :)


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H

always adore your wideband socratic method...you do it with smooth poetic style...so easy to read your lines as they skip across the page..bravo!

love
Jeff

I am grateful dear Jeff..


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H

Your poem read to me like a history of the human species condensed and put into gorgeous poetry. Your vocabulary was very impressive. I am in awe of your creation my sweet girl from the east. You gave me some delicately wonderful imagery and ideas to contemplate at this juncture of human history. And this was oh so sensual.

Hugs,
John

Thank you.
It's always fun to add a little sensual twist in things..

My vocabulary is not that spectacular
but whenever I try write a poem
I take extra time is all...

I am so happy to be given such acknowledgement of my work
from a great writer as yourself...


Again,
thank you


H

I love this very cleverly crafted and oozing wisdom through its metaphor - Such an impressive write :-)))))

Thank you very much
To hear from a admired poet as you, dear david sir..



H