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I Desire
Without you I feel empty,
Your essence is liquid fire burning through my veins;
Your touch ignites an intense desire within me,
You shift the dial between pleasure and pain.
Your raven hair glows under the moonlight,
Your eyes like a pitch-black sky filled with glistening stars;
I hungrily take in the angelic sight,
My animal instinct urges me to pounce on you like a jaguar.
We grind our naked bodies together,
A deep ache burns between my legs;
I rub myself against your growth, and marvel at your strangulated pleasure,
You know I’m teasing you, yet you refuse to beg.
You gently caress my most sacred place,
Sending shivers through my body;
The only language I know to speak is your name,
As you whisper in my ear something naughty.
I’ve been untouched for too long; I’m incredibly sensitive,
Inside of me is a fire that only you can extinguish;
I need you inside of me to feel the delicious friction,
My eyes are locked on your member standing attentive.
Our eyes meet; a brief, but power connection passes through us,
Lust, affection, need, and perhaps love?
There’s no fear, only mutual trust,
Behind you spread wings as white as a dove’s.
My desire increases as you turn on the beast within me,
I start to leak on the bed, and you know that I’m ready;
You take your sweet, agonizing time entering me,
I can feel your heartbeat inside of me.
I feel like I’m losing control,
We drink each other’s moans with sweet kisses;
Stars fill my vision as my nervous system fries from pleasure overload,
Our joining is not based on dominance, but on mutual respect and tenderness.
You whisper in my ear the three words I’ve always wanted to hear,
I can’t think coherently with the exquisite feeling of you moving in and out of me;
In a rush, my feelings for you are startlingly clear,
As I feel your hot seed explode inside of me.
“I love you” I whisper back, “I’m yours: mind, body and soul.”
It only took the right reader to see your beauty;
You smile down at me “when connected to you, I feel whole.”
“Please don’t ever leave me.”
In that moment, I realize something grand,
My desire for you isn’t just physical;
Despite how I crave the touch of your hand,
I love you most for aspects that are emotional.
Your essence is liquid fire burning through my veins;
Your touch ignites an intense desire within me,
You shift the dial between pleasure and pain.
Your raven hair glows under the moonlight,
Your eyes like a pitch-black sky filled with glistening stars;
I hungrily take in the angelic sight,
My animal instinct urges me to pounce on you like a jaguar.
We grind our naked bodies together,
A deep ache burns between my legs;
I rub myself against your growth, and marvel at your strangulated pleasure,
You know I’m teasing you, yet you refuse to beg.
You gently caress my most sacred place,
Sending shivers through my body;
The only language I know to speak is your name,
As you whisper in my ear something naughty.
I’ve been untouched for too long; I’m incredibly sensitive,
Inside of me is a fire that only you can extinguish;
I need you inside of me to feel the delicious friction,
My eyes are locked on your member standing attentive.
Our eyes meet; a brief, but power connection passes through us,
Lust, affection, need, and perhaps love?
There’s no fear, only mutual trust,
Behind you spread wings as white as a dove’s.
My desire increases as you turn on the beast within me,
I start to leak on the bed, and you know that I’m ready;
You take your sweet, agonizing time entering me,
I can feel your heartbeat inside of me.
I feel like I’m losing control,
We drink each other’s moans with sweet kisses;
Stars fill my vision as my nervous system fries from pleasure overload,
Our joining is not based on dominance, but on mutual respect and tenderness.
You whisper in my ear the three words I’ve always wanted to hear,
I can’t think coherently with the exquisite feeling of you moving in and out of me;
In a rush, my feelings for you are startlingly clear,
As I feel your hot seed explode inside of me.
“I love you” I whisper back, “I’m yours: mind, body and soul.”
It only took the right reader to see your beauty;
You smile down at me “when connected to you, I feel whole.”
“Please don’t ever leave me.”
In that moment, I realize something grand,
My desire for you isn’t just physical;
Despite how I crave the touch of your hand,
I love you most for aspects that are emotional.
Written by
LunasChild8
Published 31st Jan 2018
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Re. I Desire
Fantastic and stimulating.Language is tingling with evocative power. Reading it is experiencing the sensational journey into the wet and throbbing tunnel of love-making. Lines rock with orgasmic pulsation and moan with tension of anticipation. They caress our inner core of libidinous hunger and bring out the wild climax of exploding joy.
Congrats.
Congrats.
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19th Sep 2018 00:41am
Hello sharadrajimwale. I'd appreciate you voting for my poem in the "DRINKING, SMOKING AND SCREWING" competition.
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1st Feb 2018 7:03am
Like the way you convey the emotionality as well as physicality of the desire of the woman for the man. Favourite sequence of verses:
We grind our naked bodies together,
A deep ache burns between my legs;
I rub myself against your growth, and marvel at your strangulated pleasure,
You know I’m teasing you, yet you refuse to beg.
You gently caress my most sacred place,
Sending shivers through my body;
The only language I know to speak is your name,
As you whisper in my ear something naughty.
I’ve been untouched for too long; I’m incredibly sensitive,
Inside of me is a fire that only you can extinguish;
I need you inside of me to feel the delicious friction,
My eyes are locked on your member standing attentive.
We grind our naked bodies together,
A deep ache burns between my legs;
I rub myself against your growth, and marvel at your strangulated pleasure,
You know I’m teasing you, yet you refuse to beg.
You gently caress my most sacred place,
Sending shivers through my body;
The only language I know to speak is your name,
As you whisper in my ear something naughty.
I’ve been untouched for too long; I’m incredibly sensitive,
Inside of me is a fire that only you can extinguish;
I need you inside of me to feel the delicious friction,
My eyes are locked on your member standing attentive.
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Re: Re. I Desire
19th Sep 2018 00:41am
I message you yet again, Solomon, for the same purpose of voting for this last entry in the "DRINKING, SMOKING AND SCREWING" competition.
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2nd Feb 2018 5:38am
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2nd Feb 2018 2:15pm
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19th Sep 2018 00:42am
Hello Snkalways. I'd appreciate you voting for my poem in the "DRINKING, SMOKING AND SCREWING" competition.
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2nd Feb 2018 8:45pm
Re: Re. I Desire
19th Sep 2018 00:42am
Hi jakyla. I'd appreciate you voting for my poem in the "DRINKING, SMOKING AND SCREWING" competition.
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Re: Re. I Desire
19th Sep 2018 00:42am
Hi Danny, I'd appreciate you voting for my poem in the "DRINKING, SMOKING AND SCREWING" competition.
Re. I Desire
7th Feb 2018 9:58pm
loved the rhyming...and the rising crescendo of emotion and physicality...great read
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19th Sep 2018 00:43am
I message you yet again, Lawrence, for the purpose of asking you to vote for this final entry in the "DRINKING, SMOKING AND SCREWING" competition.
Re. I Desire
7th Feb 2018 11:25pm
Luna, You've made me tingle with ectasy. You describe so beautifully a wonderous connection. I love the hard and soft contrast in these two lines:
"Stars fill my vision as my nervous system fries from pleasure overload,
Our joining is not based on dominance, but on mutual respect and tenderness."
The animal intensity of coitus and the tender feeling of oneness.
And this passage is heavenly. To know the thoughts of your lover as you engage in the most intimate of experiences is pure bliss:
"I can’t think coherently with the exquisite feeling of you moving in and out of me;"
Bravisima!
"Stars fill my vision as my nervous system fries from pleasure overload,
Our joining is not based on dominance, but on mutual respect and tenderness."
The animal intensity of coitus and the tender feeling of oneness.
And this passage is heavenly. To know the thoughts of your lover as you engage in the most intimate of experiences is pure bliss:
"I can’t think coherently with the exquisite feeling of you moving in and out of me;"
Bravisima!
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7th Feb 2018 11:59pm
Re: Re. I Desire
19th Sep 2018 00:43am
Hola amigo. I'd appreciate you voting for my poem in the "DRINKING, SMOKING AND SCREWING" competition.
Re. I Desire
Lunar phases hold tidal sway over human sexuality as it does the ebb & flow of Earth’s mighty oceans. Your poem captures both ebb & flow. All contained between two bodies that emulate forces that would otherwise crush them.
🌊🌛
🌊🌛
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Re: Re. I Desire
8th Feb 2018 4:59am
The Moon indeed has an intense effect on humans, especially us of the Cancer Zodiac sign.
Thanks for your comment!
Thanks for your comment!
Re: Re. I Desire
19th Sep 2018 00:44am
Hello again, dear Jade. I'd appreciate you voting for this entry in the "DRINKING, SMOKING AND SCREWING" competition.
Re. I Desire
17th Mar 2018 3:02pm
I see where "Fantastic" has already been used at least a couple of times to describe your poem, but that is exactly what I thought after reading it. It was intimate/erotic without being pornographic. It was like we were being allowed in to witness a special moment between two people instead of watching two people performing for us, if that makes sense? Good job writing that one!
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Re: Re. I Desire
17th Mar 2018 3:09pm
Thank you! When I wrote this, I was trying not to make it seem like a pornographic video, and to be something intimate.
Feel free to check out my other work.
Feel free to check out my other work.
Re: Re. I Desire
19th Sep 2018 00:44am
Hello Seed. I'd appreciate you voting for my poem in the "DRINKING, SMOKING AND SCREWING" competition.
Re. I Desire
28th Mar 2018 10:31pm
I like the animal instinct terminology, very good terms in the poem
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28th Mar 2018 10:40pm
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19th Sep 2018 00:45am
Hello marilyn. I'd appreciate you voting for my poem in the "DRINKING, SMOKING AND SCREWING" competition.
Re. I Desire
18th Apr 2018 10:10pm
Wonderful sensual poem ... love the rhyming in this ... I am so envious. Made me warm and tingly in secret places ...
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18th Apr 2018 10:14pm
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19th Sep 2018 00:46am
Hello again, LDF. I'd appreciate you voting for this entry in the "DRINKING, SMOKING AND SCREWING" competition.
Re. I Desire
20th May 2019 5:14am
Damn, S...you blew this out of the freaking water. Your depth, emotion, the length, content...I'm jelly but stoked for you. I don't think I've seen you write erotica...so sensual. I'm going to vote now!
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20th May 2019 12:18pm
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20th May 2019 8:59pm
I see now, this is old. No wonder I couldn't find the damn competition ☺🙄
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Re: Re. I Desire
21st May 2019 00:00am
I've written 2 other erotica poems, if you're interested in reading them. "Temptation" and "Hit the Shower."
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22nd May 2019 3:48pm