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Love Falling
when I look to the sky
I see endless gray
and trust there's blue behind it
fading
weather shifting
wind tangling my hair
thoughts accumulating like snow
frozen
lost in a moment I'll never find
losing myself to him
all nature against me
fighting my feelings
praying I'll lose
and knowing I'll win eventually
when I let go
but I cannot release
I'm falling in love.
I see endless gray
and trust there's blue behind it
fading
weather shifting
wind tangling my hair
thoughts accumulating like snow
frozen
lost in a moment I'll never find
losing myself to him
all nature against me
fighting my feelings
praying I'll lose
and knowing I'll win eventually
when I let go
but I cannot release
I'm falling in love.
Published 30th Jan 2018
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30th Jan 2018 11:31pm
beautiful Fairy what a wonderful metaphor
to be compared with the feeling of falling in love..
beautiful..
love Crim
to be compared with the feeling of falling in love..
beautiful..
love Crim
31st Jan 2018 9:33pm
30th Jan 2018 11:32pm
The ever present hope is so well illustrated in your first lines. I can feel the tension in this piece...the holding back of the inevitable. Brava!
31st Jan 2018 9:34pm
Gahddess, I’m glad you felt the tension, that was my intent :) thank you for your kind words
31st Jan 2018 2:55am
31st Jan 2018 9:35pm
